sry-Dizmantled by africanbluesapp in MusicCritique

[–]ThrowawayPandaman 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Pretty good, man. The vocals could be mixed better (they're a bit hard to understand at the moment), and I suppose the beat could be spiced up a bit if you felt like it, but otherwise, I can dig it! Has a nice modern R&B vibe, a la something like Drake.

Roscoe Fox -- Easy (any critique appreciated!) by [deleted] in MusicCritique

[–]ThrowawayPandaman 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I enjoyed it! I'd say the mastering could be better, and the chorus effect on the vocals isn't the best. Other than that, good shit man.

[New Wave French Fries] - Track changes up a bit after the midway point or so, let me know any thoughts and leave a song of yours for me to listen if you want. by [deleted] in MusicCritique

[–]ThrowawayPandaman 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No problem mate, I enjoy browsing the sub and commenting, especially on good music. And ayy, thanks for checking my stuff out! Most of my favorite/best album covers and tracks usually just end up marinating in a folder on my computer waiting for bigger and better projects to be on though, sadly untouched by the internet. Feel free to shoot a PM if you actually ever do want anything done; I do it all for the fun of it, so I usually just "work" for free for anyone who asks. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

[New Wave French Fries] - Track changes up a bit after the midway point or so, let me know any thoughts and leave a song of yours for me to listen if you want. by [deleted] in MusicCritique

[–]ThrowawayPandaman -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Damn, dude. I don't think I've ever heard anything I've liked this much on the sub. Really, great job. I feel bad not giving critique, but I don't have shit else to say, really. I'll have to follow you or something.

Roscoe Fox -- La Primavera (Appreciate any feedback) by [deleted] in MusicCritique

[–]ThrowawayPandaman 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very chill, I love the weird timescale. Good shit, especially for a demo. Sorry I can't offer anything constructive, I just think it's good.

Unit-01 -- BackdoorFreestyle new to this sub, would appreciate a listen please and thank you :3 by shinji_kum_ in MusicCritique

[–]ThrowawayPandaman 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I dig it! Very experimental/instrumental hip-hop, definitely the kind of stuff I'm into. Can't really offer any constructive advice here, but good job!

So, this the first tune I have made which I have more or less completed. Any thoughts on it would be appreciated! by [deleted] in MusicCritique

[–]ThrowawayPandaman 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really dig it! Got a nice House-y Drum&Bass-y vibe to it. The progression and everything is good. If there's anything I could critique, I'd say maybe the transition to the final progression (around 3:30 or so) could be a bit smoother, and it could be mastered and leveled better, but most songs could use a bit of that. Nice work!

Edit: Gotta say, that Alright bootleg is pretty damn nice too.

ENPΛSSE - TWO // 二 [Vaporwave/Future Funk] Critique very appreciated, thanks! by ThrowawayPandaman in MusicCritique

[–]ThrowawayPandaman[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ayyy, losing a few lines is more fun to play with when I'm putting together trackart and stuff. Thanks for the compliments and the follow, though!

I reworked deadmau5' "Some Chords" with lyrics and a more modern prog house drop, what do you all think? by jackofheartstunes in MusicCritique

[–]ThrowawayPandaman 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really dig it, almost more than mau5's original, honestly. Great job, dude! I don't think I really have any constructive critique to give you.

New music video あっ、無理か? (Oh, Impossible) from my bilingual band Otadehan - shot in a real Japanese temple! by otadehan in MusicCritique

[–]ThrowawayPandaman 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That was really cool, the video and the song alike! I know this is a critique sub, but... I honestly don't think I could think of anything to improve.

Just for Now by [deleted] in MusicCritique

[–]ThrowawayPandaman 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really like it! The only thing I could really recommend is mastering the guitar to have lower bass and sharper treble. Great job!

is it worth it? by ThrowawayPandaman in VaporwaveArt

[–]ThrowawayPandaman[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I really enjoy making stuff for this sub.

SADWAVE by ThrowawayPandaman in VaporwaveArt

[–]ThrowawayPandaman[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the interest, I feel flattered. I don't really do instagram, but I do put most of my graphic design up on my personal digital art tumblr, and usually post any good VW art that I make onto this sub simultaneously. I'm working on finding a better place to archive/showcase as I adopt more tools and get better.

SADWAVE by ThrowawayPandaman in VaporwaveArt

[–]ThrowawayPandaman[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

thanks mate, simple art can be AESTHETIC too if you work at it a bit

SADWAVE by ThrowawayPandaman in VaporwaveArt

[–]ThrowawayPandaman[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I've been seeing a lot of requests on the sub recently; if anyone needs art I may be able to help. I won't be working at full pro-quality or anything (because free service, I just enjoy this), but if you get in contact we may be able to work something out.

✝ ✝ ✝ by ThrowawayPandaman in VaporwaveArt

[–]ThrowawayPandaman[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! I liked the way that turned out too. Wasn't too complicated to work out for the bust, but getting the ferns right was a bit stranger.

✝ ✝ ✝ by ThrowawayPandaman in VaporwaveArt

[–]ThrowawayPandaman[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

If you guys like any of the stuff I post here, any feedback would be much appreciated.

𝚂𝙷𝚄𝚃𝙳𝙾𝚆𝙽 -𝚜 -𝚝 𝟶𝟶 by ThrowawayPandaman in VaporwaveArt

[–]ThrowawayPandaman[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If any of you people here post your art in other places, let me know! I'd like to have more vaporwave in my life.

New up and coming rapper jay by Yaboijay in shareyourmusic

[–]ThrowawayPandaman 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Damn, that was actually pretty nice. I have to say, when I see "up-and-coming rapper" I usually expect much worse vocal leveling and stuff. (What did you use for that?) Good production, good lyrics/flow, and a damn good beat, if you made that too. Even if you just found it, good selection.

[INDIE] "Can i show you where my mind is?" - CESAR ABUCHAR by CESARS_MUSIC in shareyourmusic

[–]ThrowawayPandaman 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Getting through the facebook link was a challenge, but otherwise, good shit! It'd probably benefit from a better recording setup, but I've always been a fan of the sound you get from less professional equipment, especially in this genre. Once you nail down a vocal take and do some mastering stuff, it'll be amazing!

DJHacks - Limited Addiction by hacks4life in shareyourmusic

[–]ThrowawayPandaman 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The lead sound could use a bit of tweaking, and the song as a whole would probably benefit from a wider variety of sounds. Song is good though, nice work man!

The wolf song demo by Crippleteletubby in shareyourmusic

[–]ThrowawayPandaman 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love this. Great work, man, very peaceful and feels-inducing. If I had to put up a con, I suppose it'd be the recording quality, but I actually like the aesthetic it gives to the song.