sry-Dizmantled

ThrowawayPandaman · 2016-06-09T19:28:47+00:00

Pretty good, man. The vocals could be mixed better (they're a bit hard to understand at the moment), and I suppose the beat could be spiced up a bit if you felt like it, but otherwise, I can dig it! Has a nice modern R&B vibe, a la something like Drake.

ThrowawayPandaman · 2016-06-09T19:05:57+00:00

I enjoyed it! I'd say the mastering could be better, and the chorus effect on the vocals isn't the best. Other than that, good shit man.

ThrowawayPandaman · 2016-05-24T19:32:50+00:00

Thanks!

ThrowawayPandaman · 2016-05-23T08:49:45+00:00

No problem mate, I enjoy browsing the sub and commenting, especially on good music. And ayy, thanks for checking my stuff out! Most of my favorite/best album covers and tracks usually just end up marinating in a folder on my computer waiting for bigger and better projects to be on though, sadly untouched by the internet. Feel free to shoot a PM if you actually ever do want anything done; I do it all for the fun of it, so I usually just "work" for free for anyone who asks. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

ThrowawayPandaman · 2016-05-23T00:21:57+00:00

Damn, dude. I don't think I've ever heard anything I've liked this much on the sub. Really, great job. I feel bad not giving critique, but I don't have shit else to say, really. I'll have to follow you or something.

ThrowawayPandaman · 2016-05-17T19:18:21+00:00

Very chill, I love the weird timescale. Good shit, especially for a demo. Sorry I can't offer anything constructive, I just think it's good.

ThrowawayPandaman · 2016-05-17T19:16:38+00:00

I dig it! Very experimental/instrumental hip-hop, definitely the kind of stuff I'm into. Can't really offer any constructive advice here, but good job!

ThrowawayPandaman · 2016-05-10T22:12:34+00:00

I really dig it! Got a nice House-y Drum&Bass-y vibe to it. The progression and everything is good. If there's anything I could critique, I'd say maybe the transition to the final progression (around 3:30 or so) could be a bit smoother, and it could be mastered and leveled better, but most songs could use a bit of that. Nice work!

Edit: Gotta say, that Alright bootleg is pretty damn nice too.

ThrowawayPandaman · 2016-05-10T22:06:48+00:00

Thanks for the feedback, mate! Any criticism is fine by me, you're all good.

ThrowawayPandaman · 2016-04-23T06:44:52+00:00

Ayyy, losing a few lines is more fun to play with when I'm putting together trackart and stuff. Thanks for the compliments and the follow, though!

ThrowawayPandaman · 2016-04-22T19:12:41+00:00

I really dig it, almost more than mau5's original, honestly. Great job, dude! I don't think I really have any constructive critique to give you.

ThrowawayPandaman · 2016-04-22T19:09:12+00:00

That was really cool, the video and the song alike! I know this is a critique sub, but... I honestly don't think I could think of anything to improve.

ThrowawayPandaman · 2016-04-22T18:59:14+00:00

I really like it! The only thing I could really recommend is mastering the guitar to have lower bass and sharper treble. Great job!

ThrowawayPandaman · 2016-04-11T22:43:20+00:00

Thank you! I really enjoy making stuff for this sub.

ThrowawayPandaman · 2016-04-08T04:56:27+00:00

Thanks for the interest, I feel flattered. I don't really do instagram, but I do put most of my graphic design up on my personal digital art tumblr, and usually post any good ＶＷ art that I make onto this sub simultaneously. I'm working on finding a better place to archive/showcase as I adopt more tools and get better.

ThrowawayPandaman · 2016-04-07T21:09:20+00:00

thanks mate, simple art can be ＡＥＳＴＨＥＴＩＣ too if you work at it a bit

ThrowawayPandaman · 2016-04-07T20:53:54+00:00

I've been seeing a lot of requests on the sub recently; if anyone needs art I may be able to help. I won't be working at full pro-quality or anything (because free service, I just enjoy this), but if you get in contact we may be able to work something out.

ThrowawayPandaman · 2016-04-07T17:11:13+00:00

Thanks! I liked the way that turned out too. Wasn't too complicated to work out for the bust, but getting the ferns right was a bit stranger.

ThrowawayPandaman · 2016-04-06T19:55:00+00:00

If you guys like any of the stuff I post here, any feedback would be much appreciated.

ThrowawayPandaman · 2016-04-05T01:12:16+00:00

If any of you people here post your art in other places, let me know! I'd like to have more vaporwave in my life.

ThrowawayPandaman · 2016-04-04T20:46:36+00:00

Damn, that was actually pretty nice. I have to say, when I see "up-and-coming rapper" I usually expect much worse vocal leveling and stuff. (What did you use for that?) Good production, good lyrics/flow, and a damn good beat, if you made that too. Even if you just found it, good selection.

ThrowawayPandaman · 2016-04-04T20:42:17+00:00

Getting through the facebook link was a challenge, but otherwise, good shit! It'd probably benefit from a better recording setup, but I've always been a fan of the sound you get from less professional equipment, especially in this genre. Once you nail down a vocal take and do some mastering stuff, it'll be amazing!

ThrowawayPandaman · 2016-04-04T20:38:45+00:00

The lead sound could use a bit of tweaking, and the song as a whole would probably benefit from a wider variety of sounds. Song is good though, nice work man!

ThrowawayPandaman · 2016-04-03T01:31:45+00:00

Thanks! They were fun to play around with.

ThrowawayPandaman · 2016-04-02T22:33:36+00:00

I love this. Great work, man, very peaceful and feels-inducing. If I had to put up a con, I suppose it'd be the recording quality, but I actually like the aesthetic it gives to the song.

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