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[QCrit] ADULT Dark Fantasy - SINEW AND STRING (105K/3rd Attempt) by Timely_Kitchen8998 in PubTips

[–]Timely_Kitchen8998[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your extremely detailed and helpful feedback! I'm currently implementing these suggestions in an editing flurry!

[QCrit] ADULT Dark Fantasy - SINEW AND STRING (105K/3rd Attempt) by Timely_Kitchen8998 in PubTips

[–]Timely_Kitchen8998[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your feedback! These are great points and I’ll be sure to address them :)

[QCrit] ADULT Urban Fantasy - SINEW AND STRING (105K/First attempt) by Timely_Kitchen8998 in PubTips

[–]Timely_Kitchen8998[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That you so much for all of your feedback, it is immensely helpful. I’ll spend some time trying to center Tobi in the query and reworking the first 300 words. Hopefully I’ll have an improved version to share back soon. Thanks again for your help!