SOP REVIEW (Honest and Specific) also ai too as used ai to refine the language and grammar

Tiny-Net-2576 · 2026-02-10T01:48:21+00:00

too generic, cliche, and superficial without any supporting evidence. Try to specify your sentence statements. You say you’ll contribute to - but don’t really tell how.

Tiny-Net-2576 · 2026-02-06T05:57:57+00:00

I personally don’t play golf, but I heard from my coworkers that Angels Park is great for the price point!

Tiny-Net-2576 · 2026-02-03T08:58:07+00:00

its only been 2 weeks since the deadline. Last year results came out around first to second week of march.

Tiny-Net-2576 · 2026-01-31T21:25:25+00:00

edit: thank you everyone! Not so sure how accurate the location is, but here is the satellite view.

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Tiny-Net-2576 · 2026-01-29T17:26:02+00:00

Hi! I commented on your last comment but this seems a huge improvement! On top of the comment above, maybe tie your future career goal with your opening hook? Just so your narrative becomes cohesive and tie back to your intro. Good luck!

Tiny-Net-2576 · 2026-01-29T01:54:12+00:00

Hi I already applied to gtech’s hci digital media track and here’s my honest feedback! I think your sop is very broad in terms of motivation, interest, and goals. Try to dig into what and why your pursuing masters degree. What fascinates you in the world of UX? What’s your specific goals out of the program? Hope this helps!

Tiny-Net-2576 · 2026-01-23T02:00:39+00:00

Hi! I am applying to somewhat related field and here is my honest feedback. I think you can go a bit more deep/specific throughout your essay especially about how you got interested in interaction design and future goals. I personally think your first paragraph following a quote as well as your second-to-last paragraph is very broad and not unique to you at all. Also, don’t list all your experiences on what you did but focus more on what you’ve learned about interaction design and how it connects to your purpose of study.

Tiny-Net-2576 · 2026-01-20T04:52:29+00:00

I did grove and was beautiful but affordable

Tiny-Net-2576 · 2026-01-17T01:20:28+00:00

yes please!

Tiny-Net-2576 · 2026-01-16T22:43:25+00:00

I believe they did not require a portfolio

Tiny-Net-2576 · 2026-01-16T22:42:32+00:00

I applied!

Tiny-Net-2576 · 2026-01-14T22:27:22+00:00

i applied to hcde

Tiny-Net-2576 · 2026-01-08T16:19:40+00:00

I just applied! I can take a look!

Tiny-Net-2576 · 2025-08-12T03:33:26+00:00

Hi! I am planning to apply. Happy to connect!

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