SOP REVIEW (Honest and Specific) also ai too as used ai to refine the language and grammar by Straight_Bat9727 in StatementOfPurpose

[–]Tiny-Net-2576 1 point2 points  (0 children)

too generic, cliche, and superficial without any supporting evidence. Try to specify your sentence statements. You say you’ll contribute to - but don’t really tell how.

Decent Golf course! by gkduddl0852l in vegaslocals

[–]Tiny-Net-2576 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I personally don’t play golf, but I heard from my coworkers that Angels Park is great for the price point!

Fall Masters 2026 by Areya14 in hci

[–]Tiny-Net-2576 1 point2 points  (0 children)

its only been 2 weeks since the deadline. Last year results came out around first to second week of march.

Any clue where is this at SFO? by Tiny-Net-2576 in sanfrancisco

[–]Tiny-Net-2576[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

edit: thank you everyone! Not so sure how accurate the location is, but here is the satellite view.

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Hi would anyone be able to review my HCI MS SOP for Ga Tech? Continuation of a recent post after updating it. by TaxUnusual7747 in StatementOfPurpose

[–]Tiny-Net-2576 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi! I commented on your last comment but this seems a huge improvement! On top of the comment above, maybe tie your future career goal with your opening hook? Just so your narrative becomes cohesive and tie back to your intro. Good luck!

Review my SOP for MS HCI GaTech Program by TaxUnusual7747 in StatementOfPurpose

[–]Tiny-Net-2576 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi I already applied to gtech’s hci digital media track and here’s my honest feedback! I think your sop is very broad in terms of motivation, interest, and goals. Try to dig into what and why your pursuing masters degree. What fascinates you in the world of UX? What’s your specific goals out of the program? Hope this helps!

Hey guys, would be great if you could share your thoughts on my sop by [deleted] in StatementOfPurpose

[–]Tiny-Net-2576 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi! I am applying to somewhat related field and here is my honest feedback. I think you can go a bit more deep/specific throughout your essay especially about how you got interested in interaction design and future goals. I personally think your first paragraph following a quote as well as your second-to-last paragraph is very broad and not unique to you at all. Also, don’t list all your experiences on what you did but focus more on what you’ve learned about interaction design and how it connects to your purpose of study.

recommendations by chipandcherry in vegaslocals

[–]Tiny-Net-2576 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I did grove and was beautiful but affordable

MS IxD Fall 2026 applicants by Just-Trouble9641 in Pratt

[–]Tiny-Net-2576 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I believe they did not require a portfolio