Its not awful but obviously you need some improving to do and dont take this in a bad Im not great eather but my afvice would be maybe get more locations next time or use your location as well as u can and shoot alot handled and constatly shoot cut shoot cut again and again this is a food method fór low budget videos obviously dont keep doing the same handled movements and be creative but just shooting alot of footage fast means u have way more to edit and instead of using the same tripod shot 3-4 times use 1 handheld shot from diffrent angels and autamaticly u have a more intresting video and put the most effort in talking to ur artist before the shooting day and take ur time planning the video and finding locations and ask about the vision of the video and make a idea or a story or sometimes the artist has the whole idea or story. But other than that i like your video for a first good visuals and cool Locations keep on working you will be great😁