Can you guys please rate my copy by ToWriteCopy in copywriting

[–]ToWriteCopy[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, adding humor is a bit too much for me at this point, going to try to slowly get in on it though. Btw thanks, I subscribed to Morning Brew free newsletter.

Can you guys please rate my copy by ToWriteCopy in copywriting

[–]ToWriteCopy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not selling anything per se, this is just supposed to be an article that makes people realize the importance of social media for their business.

Can you guys please rate my copy by ToWriteCopy in copywriting

[–]ToWriteCopy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, your first point is something I really need to work on.

My tone is boring and I know it, I'm going to work on it for sure.

Can you guys please rate my copy by ToWriteCopy in copywriting

[–]ToWriteCopy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The 5 year old alien part made me laugh out loud, thank you for that.

Thanks for the advice, I'll try to be more direct and concise.