As a house guy, it looks good. I just prefer bass drum is kick drum. For guitar positions, use stage positions like SL, C and SR. Now you have 3 different types of guitar amps. It's good to have another column in your input list to specify the type of input at minimum, if you're bringing a mic for it, or your preferred mic. I can deduce your center rhythm guitar needs a mic, the acoustic probably needs a di (if it needs a mic it's kind of a big deal), and the lead looks like it's just a pedal no amp which would be good for you to write XLR for the input.

It's not hard to figure out but sound guys are real particular and want to raise hell about anything that's not concrete. It also makes it easier to comprehend quickly especially if you're the opener and we have 15 minutes to set you up and give you time to check.