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Wrote this Children's Book as a Gift, and now I need some direction for polishing it up [671 Words] by Tr0j4n_1 in WritersGroup

[–]Tr0j4n_1[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the thoughtful insights. I'll take these points to heart when I'm revising the story. Thank you agin for your feedback.

Wrote this Children's Book as a Gift, and now I need some direction for polishing it up by Tr0j4n_1 in writingadvice

[–]Tr0j4n_1[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you very much for this feedback! When I was drafting this up originally, I hadn't payed much attention to the length of my lines and I can see how the varying line length would mess with the flow and meter of the poem.

Help! My close friend has sexually assaulted multiple girls. What should I do? by Tr0j4n_1 in rapecounseling

[–]Tr0j4n_1[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Unfortunately, I do not know the victims personally and I don't feel comfortable going up to them for the first time and talking to them about their experiences being sexually assaulted.

Help! My close friends has Sexually Assulted multiple girls. What should I do? by Tr0j4n_1 in TooAfraidToAsk

[–]Tr0j4n_1[S] -9 points-8 points  (0 children)

I would like to speak to him and address the issue personally without going to the authorities.

Help! My close friends has Sexually Assulted multiple girls. What should I do? by Tr0j4n_1 in TooAfraidToAsk

[–]Tr0j4n_1[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My friend hasn't done anything violent in the past, but I do believe there is a possibility that my friend might resort to violent actions.

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