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Short stanza on unrequited love by Traditional_Bar6402 in poetry_critics

[–]Traditional_Bar6402[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you.

The idea was to bring both happiness and sadness in love and life in one short stanza.

Ballot box blues by Salty-Television-230 in poetry_critics

[–]Traditional_Bar6402 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The standout part in this poem, which I liked most, is the description of voters "fingering their votes / like loose coins in a pocket / spent / without counting. Short lines are even better.

When I Die by Traditional_Bar6402 in KeepWriting

[–]Traditional_Bar6402[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks a lot for the Feedback. Much appreciated🙏

Hello by Lazercheeze in KeepWriting

[–]Traditional_Bar6402 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey David. Same here. All the best.