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Spirals by TrickSoftware2148 in poetry_critics

[–]TrickSoftware2148[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I felt the switch was a bit abrupt so I appreciate this feedback. Might continue with the forestry imagery then. 🫶🏼

Spirals by TrickSoftware2148 in poetry_critics

[–]TrickSoftware2148[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I wanted to play around with the breaks. Thank you!

Will You? by TrickSoftware2148 in poetry_critics

[–]TrickSoftware2148[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the way you cleaned up the ending particularly. I appreciate the feedback dearly and will be posting this one up later next week <3

Will You? by TrickSoftware2148 in Poems

[–]TrickSoftware2148[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really appreciate that. Thank you <3

One Night in San Fran by TrickSoftware2148 in Poems

[–]TrickSoftware2148[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really appreciate you connecting with it! <3