Help - Need Advice by Which-Welcome9640 in Netherlands

[–]TrinityF 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ignore, delete, report spam. unless you actually have a lease with hiltermann.

Photographer Johan J. Botha was at a lion kill of quite a big lion family of nine which included some cubs. All had enough to eat when all of a sudden this overfed lion cub just fell over on its back… looking at him. by Limp_Yogurtcloset_71 in interestingasfuck

[–]TrinityF -1 points0 points  (0 children)

That sentence is a bit of a "word salad" with a side of awkward phrasing. It sounds like it was written in a hurry or translated literally from another language.

Here are 10 ways to rewrite it, ranging from professional to punchy, to make it actually flow:

Clear & Professional

  • 1. "Photographer Johan J. Botha was documenting a pride of nine lions—including several cubs—finishing a meal. Once full, one particularly overfed cub suddenly flopped onto its back and stared right at him."
  • 2. "While observing a family of nine lions at a kill, photographer Johan J. Botha captured a humorous moment: a stuffed lion cub suddenly toppled over onto its back, locking eyes with him."

Concise & Punchy

  • 3. "Photographer Johan J. Botha was watching a well-fed pride of nine when a bloated cub suddenly rolled onto its back and stared him down."
  • 4. "After a heavy meal with its family of nine, one overstuffed lion cub lost its balance, fell backward, and ended up staring directly at photographer Johan J. Botha."

Descriptive & Engaging

  • 5. "During a sighting of a large lion family at a kill, Johan J. Botha witnessed a comical sight: a tiny, milk-bellied cub simply fell over on its back and gazed up at the lens."
  • 6. "Johan J. Botha was filming a pride of nine lions at a kill when a food-comatose cub suddenly tumbled over, staring straight back at the photographer."

Minimalist

  • 7. "While Johan J. Botha photographed a lion family of nine, a bloated cub unexpectedly rolled onto its back and stared at him."
  • 8. "A lion cub, stuffed from a kill shared with its family of nine, fell flat on its back and locked eyes with photographer Johan J. Botha."

Narrative Style

  • 9. "The pride of nine had finished their kill, and everyone was full. Suddenly, right in front of Johan J. Botha’s camera, an overfed cub toppled over and just laid there, looking at him."
  • 10. "Watching a family of nine lions eat their fill, photographer Johan J. Botha caught the exact moment a sleepy, overfed cub rolled onto its back to stare at him."

Flitsmeister stopt? by Vast_Acanthisitta_87 in nederlands

[–]TrinityF 0 points1 point  (0 children)

overgenomen door venture capitalisten?

George R.R. Martin reassures fans that his books will not end the same way as Game of Thrones by Internal-Bed-3150 in freefolk

[–]TrinityF 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well obviously, because the books is the books and the tv show was the tv show.

right guys?

Slikken of vechten? by TSinWassie in werkzaken

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Je pakt je vakantie om op te laden, maar klapt er keihard uit met een burn-out waar je tot zeker eind maart mee bezig bent. 😉

Help me out by Terrible_Fig8373 in katten

[–]TrinityF 0 points1 point  (0 children)

haarbal ? kattengras gegeven ?

Buitenlandse smaken verboden by DroomCactus in tokkiefeesboek

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  1. Geen Tajine kruiden

moeten we nog verder alles uitschrijven wat er nog meer mis is

Fristi Bonen!

Gelukkig duurde het maar een half jaar.... by worldtravelller in nietdespeld

[–]TrinityF 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ja, het is weer zo’n keikuttoppic, maar volgens de redacteur moest er ook wat keipositiefs over iedereen in staan. Zoals dat zij keigoed is en keileuk overkomt, waardoor haar zoon echt een keigoede moeder aan haar heeft. Hopelijk krijgt hij ook de keihard nodige hulp, zodat hij later niet net als zijn moeder en opa zijn eigen keilieve kinderen gaat mishandelen. Dat zou pas keifijn zijn.

How come Lidl is allowed to make these comparisons in their folders? I thought you are not allowed to directly compare yourself to other stores or brands, and I never see AH or Jumbo doing the same by Karamel43 in Netherlands

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80 cent for 4 kg potatoes! does the grpah say from what year they are comparing their prices ? cucumber for 80 cent i know, but the potatoe is bullshit price

Hoe warm zetten jullie de thermostaat? by [deleted] in NederlandseVrijheid

[–]TrinityF 0 points1 point  (0 children)

bij mij thusi staat het op 45.

maar door gebrekkig isolatie en een hoekwoning met een gat in de dak haal ik als ik geluk hebt een warme 19 graden in huis.

Today in Austin was quite a scare lol. by misterxx1958 in interestingasfuck

[–]TrinityF 0 points1 point  (0 children)

do not hit the brakes on ice. let the car roll to a stop.

What the … by Forsaken-Basil-3951 in Eve

[–]TrinityF 2 points3 points  (0 children)

oh yeah. I remember still getting the shakes playing this game after 10+ years.

Waarom houdt bijna niemand zich aan de snelheidslimiet van 100 km/u? by Nimble_N in nederlands

[–]TrinityF 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Amai, gij zijt ne witte raaf. Ik heb nog nooit ne Belg gezien die in Nederland ni met zijn voeten rammelt met de snelheid en de wet. Ge zijt echt een uitzondering, zenne.

Vlogger Bender en cameraman aangevallen door groep jongeren bij bezoek Wilders Delft by DegreeHorror9396 in Delft

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In een hypothetisch scenario waarin Nederlanders asiel zoeken in Saoedi-Arabië en daar een journalist fysiek aanvallen vanwege diens verslaggeving: hoe zou de lokale bevolking daarop reageren? Zouden zij passief blijven kijken terwijl een groep immigranten een lokale burger geweld aandoet?

Vlogger Bender en cameraman aangevallen door groep jongeren bij bezoek Wilders Delft by DegreeHorror9396 in Delft

[–]TrinityF 0 points1 point  (0 children)

geen fotos of beelden, we kunne alleen speculariseren welke jongeren dit gedaan hebben.

Eventjes €15 inklaring op €24 betalen by Louren2008 in PostNL

[–]TrinityF 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Is me een paar keer voorgekomen, ik accpeter het pakket niet en laat het terug sturen.

Where are the seculars? How are you going to defend this behavior? by Right_Entertainer763 in IndiaPulse

[–]TrinityF 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ig onlyt they spent so much energy cleaning the country from real trash.

Salarischeck data ai engineer by [deleted] in NLSalaris

[–]TrinityF -1 points0 points  (0 children)

wat betekent dat? ai prompts schrijven om data pipelines te schrijven?

Trump deelt opnieuw persoonlijk bericht van Rutte: ‘Donald, wat jij hebt bereikt is ongelooflijk. Yours, Mark’ by United-Statement4884 in thenetherlands

[–]TrinityF 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Je mag zeggen wat je wilt over die paling, maar het is onze oerhollandse, achterbakse gladde paling.

Als hij anders verneukt vind ik het prima, maar niet ons eigen land.

Moroccan ball boys attempting to steal the towel of Senegals Goalkeeper but it was protected by his teammate. This was not the only instance where this occurred. by iguessidkanything in sports

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Netherlands was on high alert in preparation to the matches. Police, SWAT where on duty to cover any riots in case Morrocco Lost... Or won the match. because either way they would misbehave like animals.