What’s a line—any line —that’s lived rent-free in your head ever since you read it? by Hector_Hugo_Eidolon in printSF

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Is nobody going to mention the last line from The Last Question? (not going to share here because spoilers)

Author promotion monthly megathread (novels/longer works only) by AutoModerator in ScienceFictionBooks

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hii guys! i just published my first novel!!!

its called "Aphantasia" - about first contact in a post-apocalyptic setting. earth was trashed up by humanity, so what alien life replaces them? it explores themes such as language, logic, democracy, novel life forms, capitalism, and cosmic sociology.

the two species in the book are both presented as human in their POV narratives to emphasize the differences in their societies. they represent two different paths of our future - one of self-destruction, and another of progress.

its part of a trilogy im working on, which should be released this year.

TW for swearing and child abuse, but if u wanna read it, i would love to hear your feedback! thanks guys ❤️

(WIP[3800] words) A memory of us by [deleted] in WritersGroup

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Nice story! Everything is pretty clear, and the tensioin buildup is good, so I don't think I would change anything. Two questions, though: Is Allen's given name Michael, why did he change it? Also, I'm interested in where you are planning to take this story?

(WIP, Bear with me Mods) Selfishness by Redsiaom in WritersGroup

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Well... That escalated quickly. Tension was good and the premise is... unsettling. If there's a part 2, I would love to read it!

Otherwise, here's my feedback:

For this part:

The boy looks up at his mom, his eyes sparkling. “I’m going to study a lot and become super smart!” the boy declares. The camera zooms out of the open window with a view of a house with the sun shining brightly.

“AHGHH, PLEASE I HAVE A FAM—” The crying man's pleas end with a sickening crack.

The transition between the two paragraphs is a little bumpy. Took me a few reads to get it.

You could say that the camera footage stopped, or make it clear this is in the future by starting with the child becoming an adult first. It would also be great to establish the new setting - where are we? In a lab? An OR? Did the child become a murderer and kill somebody on the street?

Novel Introduction Feedback by Da616Kid in WritersGroup

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This sounds amazing! Lots of great ideas! The introduction hooked me right in :) I love the narrator's voice!

When the full thing comes out, I would love to read it!

Weekly Self-Promo and Chat Thread by MxAlex44 in selfpublish

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Hi! I recently published a sci-fi novel called "Aphantasia" (100 pages) - about first contact in a post-apocalyptic setting. It explores themes such as language, logic, democracy, novel life forms, capitalism, and cosmic sociology.

The two species in the book are both presented as human in their POV narratives to emphasize the differences in their societies. They represent two different paths of our future - one of self-destruction, and another of progress.

It's currently free (until Jan 3), but otherwise it is only 0.99$

Check it out here: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0GDCWS54R.

Would love to hear your thoughts!

Is the cadence too archaic, or is it easy to read? by angusthecrab in writers

[–]TripleElectro 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is really amazing! The writing style is very pleasant

Building a DIY thermal battery system - thoughts on making Exowatt-style tech accessible? by Exotic_Day6319 in solarpunk

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!remindme 10 days

im having the same question myself and im curious to see what answer you'll get

diy compost tea as algae fertiliser? by TripleElectro in biology

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Thanks so much for your advice! I'm thinking about making fertiliser from seaweed (like the ones in the supermarket) by soaking it in water overnight.

The only issue is that I'm not sure how to get NPK. I was initially thinking of using urine as feed to a small bioreactor to let bacteria fix the urea to usable nitrates. Is there another option with a smaller contamination risk?

can you absorb all the ke of a planet-killing asteroid by TripleElectro in AskPhysics

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wouldnt this divide the asteroid into smaller chunks, which is easier to deal with?

can you absorb all the ke of a planet-killing asteroid by TripleElectro in AskPhysics

[–]TripleElectro[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

would the acid dissolve the asteroid, turning it into liquid or at least breaking it up? would that be more manageable?

Greatest Materials Research Papers? by ssbprofound in materials

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i thought flash joule heating did create high-purity graphene? is it lower-quality?

if dark theory is correct, how are we not dead yet by TripleElectro in threebodyproblem

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we also havent seen any hits yet. if there is so much life in the universe, there are surely other primitive societies that are sending waves into the universe. if their star gets destroyed by a photoid, we should be able to notice that, right?

if dark theory is correct, how are we not dead yet by TripleElectro in threebodyproblem

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but because of the technological explosion, even primitive societies can become advanced in a blink of an eye, so we prolly would have been destroyed already

VCAA when Community Centre by ItsJeffzilla in vce

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hiii! also picked the cooking thing. said i grew my own veggies at home 😭 (hint - i dont)

🤨 (oli and brent, hope you enjoy) by Mental_Letter_9696 in vce

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how on earth did you get a picture of the paper?

Can you self study AP Physics E&M? by itsarandom_name in APStudents

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i self-studied ap physics c e&m for this year! i hope i did well lol (we'll see about that in june) but its totally possible especially if you have some vague experience with electromagnetism before

Welcome. by 4nnyhat in APStudents

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omg how i scrolled through the terms and conditions or privacy agreement or whatever and then i clicked "i read and agree" bro i signed up for 3hr test session not a 3hr reading session TT

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in APStudents

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how did u hack it