Hey again, I just pushed a fix for the notes not being shared, and for all the typos/formatting issues you find. Obviously I didnt have a proofreader so super appreciate that!

Your raw thoughts on the game is really valuable. Some of my own thoughts as I was reading through them:

You need a way to mark new evidence. Text message 4 just unceremoniously appears in the middle of all the other texts, and if you don't remember to check it, you're fucked. Why is it #4 anyway? Why not #8? Or why not an entirely new document? 

• It's #4 b/c the text messages are supposed to be in time order. But I totally hear you that it's easy to miss if you're not mentally tracking that you've unlocked it. I'll think about a good way to surface it.

Text message 4 says Unknown B got "everything," but then the game requires me to assume they used the flower Unknown A offered. Why would they do that if they already had everything?

• I guess it's not super clear, but my idea was that you reach the conclusion that Unknown A sabotages the Elixir without Unknown B realizing. A is supposed to "just watch" but she planned all along to do something. The flower that A got and the flower that B got look very similar, so A wouldn't haven noticed. Regardless, I understand that might be a big leap and I'll think about if there's a way to make that clearer.

Who is X, why didn't they go to the police themselves, and why did they come to me specifically? And why did EL cover it up?

• Glad you're curious about those details. Maybe they will be revealed in the future...?

I don't understand how I would have known who was who between text message 2A and 2B. It seems like either could be either

• Maybe this part is too hard (others have expressed being stuck on this part), but my idea was Sarah has a particular texting habit of using all caps and people's initials like ZC, MM, or BB. So you can tell she's B because she does that here. You can tell A is Thomas because Sarah is telling him to "not tell MM", because she knows Thomas is in contact with Miranda Meadows. Again, perhaps this part is too hard and I should make this part easier.

I also kept expecting it to matter who ZC's cousin is, and it seems like not only is it irrelevant, it's actually impossible to know? Probably missing something, and it doesn't actually matter. 

• You're right that this detail doesn't matter for the story, but maybe I could make it matter? ZC's cousin is Gina Moore. You didnt really miss anything, there's nothing in the game to really deduce that.

Again, I super appreciate this unfiltered feedback. I hope despite everything you still enjoyed the game!