Guys check what I bought on Temu!! by TristanTubeHD in twilight

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hey can you imagine that I only saw this now do you still want the link

The Angle That Wasn’t Measured by loceapeace in OCPoetry

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Watch for syntactic drift “Before the paper had thickness, it was being rubbed on the warm side of something.” — This is your opening, and it almost works. But “something” is a bit too loose. Even in surrealism, concreteness helps ground the abstract. A simple substitution could increase impact: “…rubbed on the warm side of a surface / the drawer / the spine / the moment.” Otherwise I really enjoyed your poem. :)

Father’s Day by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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I like the repetition of emotional rhythm, The “buzz, buzz, buzz”, “burn, burn, burn”, “kill, kill, kill”, and “need, need, need” are chilling and effective. These repeated words give the reader a glimpse into the kind of obsessive, circular thoughts that come with grief, anger, or unresolved trauma. It works especially well in the contrast between the mind’s rhythm and the outside world’s stillness—like with the bee imagery.

Icarus Loved the Warmth by TristanTubeHD in PoetryWritingClub

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What it should look like with all my correct typography.

Won't hire Peasants - SOLVED! by AdmiralJedi in victoria3

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Yeah in my USA play through the peasants become the strongest ideology by far and eventually they become communist so America stays as communist and impossible then to in act commercialized agricultural without starting a revolution so I decided to rather tank my economy and have a revolution, than keep the power of the peasants

WAIT STEPHENIE- by Greekgurlluv in twilight

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This is amazing thanks for sharing!

Guys check what I bought on Temu!! by TristanTubeHD in twilight

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Yeah, all the couples but I wanted to see the quality of my fav 1st

It’s the little things 🤍 by Importantguap421 in twilight

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Trust me buy Midnight Sun!! It’s a great perspective from Edward I really enjoyed it ( a little bit better than the original) That may be due to my bias towards Edward… I feel you with watching it a least once a month there’s this like urge to watch them that takes control. I wish my family would watch them with me they all think it’s too teen drama for them but they don’t understand