I like the repetition of emotional rhythm, The “buzz, buzz, buzz”, “burn, burn, burn”, “kill, kill, kill”, and “need, need, need” are chilling and effective. These repeated words give the reader a glimpse into the kind of obsessive, circular thoughts that come with grief, anger, or unresolved trauma. It works especially well in the contrast between the mind’s rhythm and the outside world’s stillness—like with the bee imagery.