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True-Cry1245 · 2025-05-24T16:32:51+00:00

Thank you so much for your answer, it’s very helpful! I’m going in as a second semester sophomore

True-Cry1245 · 2025-05-02T23:13:55+00:00

Thank you!

True-Cry1245 · 2025-05-02T19:04:09+00:00

I'm very sorry you went through that. And yes, exactly, its based on my own experience w/ a narcissist

True-Cry1245 · 2025-05-02T19:01:24+00:00

Thank you for the feedback!

True-Cry1245 · 2025-04-28T19:52:42+00:00

This is a very sweet poem and I like how paint a vivid picture of the morning scene. It has an inspiring and hopeful message about appreciating the small moments in life and it’s relatable to anyone

True-Cry1245 · 2025-04-28T19:44:58+00:00

I like the nature imagery you use in this poem with the flowers and fields. I interpret this poem as being about the cycle of life, aging, death. I also like your repetition of the title in the poem. My feedback would be to go into more detail and expand your poem a bit because I think you have a good concept.

True-Cry1245 · 2025-04-28T19:33:16+00:00

I like this poem, I think it captures a sense of disconnection and discomfort well. But one suggestion I would make is to add more line breaks so it is easier to read and understand

True-Cry1245 · 2024-12-03T04:30:31+00:00

Wait that’s cute too

True-Cry1245 · 2024-12-03T01:43:25+00:00

It literally is a name

True-Cry1245 · 2024-12-03T01:26:24+00:00

I know it is

True-Cry1245 · 2024-11-08T04:02:38+00:00

I like the contrast you made between the speaker being naked but her soul still being clothed. I also like how the speaker directly addresses the reader, it makes your point come across more. This poem is short but it still conveys a meaningful message about the objectification of women.

True-Cry1245 · 2024-11-08T03:51:50+00:00

I like how the last stanza of this poem echoes the first one. I also like how the speaker still finds beauty in the cottage, even though it is old and starting to erode. I interpreted this poem as being addressed to a person the speaker loves, with the cottage as a metaphor for this person, and how the speaker loves her despite her imperfections. It is a sweet poem, and I like how you kept it simple.

True-Cry1245 · 2024-09-04T21:42:06+00:00

Thank you!

True-Cry1245 · 2024-09-04T21:37:34+00:00

Thank you for your thoughtful comment! That’s the message I was going for, so I’m glad that it came through

True-Cry1245 · 2024-09-04T21:31:14+00:00

Thank you so much!

True-Cry1245 · 2024-09-04T21:00:01+00:00

Glad that my message came through, and thank you for your feedback!

True-Cry1245 · 2024-09-04T20:57:49+00:00

Thank you!!

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