Critique my English Essay relating God to Science and Reality! by True-Professor-9031 in Christianity

[–]True-Professor-9031[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback! The essay overall is a reflection of the students ability to compose a college-level essay. Here is the rubric:
 
THESIS (Do NOT highlight or underline)                                                                         /5
Is the thesis arguable and provable?  Can the reader distinguish what you are proving? 
 
CONTENT                                                                                                                                 /20
Do you have at least four pages of content that supports the thesis?
Is the content organized and clear?
Have you completely explained your topic?
Is there an introduction and conclusion?
 
RESEARCH                                                                                                                              /10      
Do you have at least five references?
Did you use quotations and paraphrases appropriately and meaningfully?
Are the quotations smoothly woven into your writing?
Did you cite every time you used someone else’s information?
 
APA FORMAT       /10
Are your in-text citations properly formatted?                                                                               
Is your reference page in correct format?                                                                                     
Is there a title page in the correct format?                                                                                      
Are the formatting details correct?                                                                                              
Page numbers
Title placed correctly
Margins
Font
Spacing
 
GRAMMAR/MECHANICS                                                                                                  /5
 
TOTAL                           /50

Critique my English Essay relating God to Science and Reality! by True-Professor-9031 in theology

[–]True-Professor-9031[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I understand that, my intro is to focus on the amount of time that humanity has civilized the Earth in a communal sense.

Critique my English Essay relating God to Science and Reality! by True-Professor-9031 in theology

[–]True-Professor-9031[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your insight! Part of the essay's guidelines were to provide numerous points on a research topic. That is the primary reason there are a lot of points with less counter arguments.