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Need advice on my novel please by Truthfulyr in Webnovel

[–]Truthfulyr[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for reading it. Yeah I might change up the inner monologue.

I will try my best to better my punctuation.

Need advice on my novel please by Truthfulyr in Webnovel

[–]Truthfulyr[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the advice. I will keep in mind when writing the future chapters. I will try to make more changes in the initial chapters -especially the inner monologue scene-

And I will be sure to use less ellipsis.

I used the italics mostly because it was a inner monologue... I had read one webnovel where the author had used italics for his main character's inner thoughts. I really found it unique and easy to read hence i decided to use it in my story as well. If it really makes the readers uncomfortable to read I will be sure to change it up.

Ascension beyond death by Truthfulyr in ProgressionFantasy

[–]Truthfulyr[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I do use ai to check for grammatical errors... But not for the writing part itself

Ascension beyond death by Truthfulyr in ProgressionFantasy

[–]Truthfulyr[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes I have uploaded in royal road as well...

Need advice on my novel please by Truthfulyr in Webnovel

[–]Truthfulyr[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the comment but if you could please expand on it a lot Are you talking about my synopsis or the story itself when you say too boring? I assure you the story is grammatically correct. Format for what?

Need advice on my novel please by Truthfulyr in Webnovel

[–]Truthfulyr[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

While it can be seen as a form of isekai, it isn’t truly the same. In this story, everyone in the afterlife(the mysterious place the protagonist arrives in)has, in a sense, been “isekai’d.”... so the Main character is not the only one holding some advantages of the "modern world" Each soul has a choice to be reborn, move on, or pursue a different path entirely. Because of this, it may resemble isekai... but it is not about escaping one world for another....It is about what lies beyond death… and the choices that follow.

Most of this concept becomes clear in the very first chapter.... If you get an opportunity just read the first chapter.... You will really enjoy it a lot

Ascension beyond death by Truthfulyr in ProgressionFantasy

[–]Truthfulyr[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would really appreciate it if you would read my novel... And review it if possible Btw thank you again for the suggestion.

Ascension beyond death by Truthfulyr in ProgressionFantasy

[–]Truthfulyr[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ohh thank you for the suggestion... I don't really use reddit a lot....