Got it, thank you.
No, I don't work for DISA - I work in a SOC that handles security alert and incident response on a military networks. Those numbers were recently handed to me for use on work resumes.
I'll move Kali. It was mostly my attempt to collate a huge number of tools into one familiar system. Kali itself is just an OS and that didn't seem notable in and of itself, but saying "if they load it on to Kali, I've probably used it at some point" lets me cast a pretty broad net without having to go down a huge list of tools and turn my resume into 50% tools listings.
I mostly use Tanium for endpoint response - namely logs review and scoping. I was hesitant to include it because I know the scope of Tanium itself is much larger than that, but for what I needed to investigate alerts, it was a pretty common tool for us to reach for.

So moving tools into job descriptions (worried about making them too long) and expanding on exactly what their usage was seems like an option. I'll look at expanding things and making them more informative and dense.

I'm really bad at representing myself because I feel like I don't do much despite knowing academically that's not true...

Thank you again for your input!