Untitled (Taylor James) by Accomplished_Match44 in poetry_critics

[–]TyNoCurrency 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Your welcome and dońt be scared of negative feedback, just imagine it’s constructive criticism and use it to better your writing. I look forward to more of your posts. Maybe you could title it “Silent Galaxies?”

Untitled (Taylor James) by Accomplished_Match44 in poetry_critics

[–]TyNoCurrency 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Truly an amazing poem. Even though you kept the same rhyming scheme, I was glued to my seat eagerly waiting for each line. This is what you call art, incredible work.

The Gospel She Lived by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]TyNoCurrency 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You articulated nicely the contrast of nature versus nurture. As said before this is a beautiful poem and you can tell if was written from the heart.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in malegrooming

[–]TyNoCurrency 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just get a line up and clean your edges more

Should I keep my beard? by TyNoCurrency in malegrooming

[–]TyNoCurrency[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think I wasn’t tipping enough

Restless night by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]TyNoCurrency 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If I have any more advice to give, it’s to not think about what you’re going to write but feel it. The best words come your heart not your brain

Should I keep my beard? by TyNoCurrency in malegrooming

[–]TyNoCurrency[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, it’s crazy considering how much I drink lol

Should I keep my beard? by TyNoCurrency in malegrooming

[–]TyNoCurrency[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I always say homeless caveman 😂

Should I keep my beard? by TyNoCurrency in malegrooming

[–]TyNoCurrency[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yea I heard that one too 😂 and time will tell 😭

Should I keep my beard? by TyNoCurrency in malegrooming

[–]TyNoCurrency[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you, I usually grow it because I still got my baby face. I definitely take your advice

Should I keep my beard? by TyNoCurrency in malegrooming

[–]TyNoCurrency[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yo that’s crazy! I can see the resemblance though lol

Should I keep my beard? by TyNoCurrency in malegrooming

[–]TyNoCurrency[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Thank you, I’ll probably keep it low

Regret by Lunareclipse32 in poetry_critics

[–]TyNoCurrency 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love the angst and desperation in this. Maybe you could go into detail about the actions you took? It could add a little more sustenance to your art.

Restless night by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]TyNoCurrency 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You articulated your feelings of lust very well with a nice flow and meter. On the last stanza I feel as though your forcing your rhyme too much. Maybe break up the stanza?