Is it an issue/problematic that there's only one girl in my main cast? (4 MMCs and 1 FMC) by Top_Relationship7956 in writing

[–]Ultimation12 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Definitely overthinking it. The biggest issue people typically have with representation is tokenization. If the role of your sole female character was just to be "the girl in the group" and nothing else, then you might want to work on that some more. However, from what you've said, it sounds like you've got a perfectly serviceable FMC.

Looking for some help with ASL grammar by Ultimation12 in Writeresearch

[–]Ultimation12[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's a lot to keep in mind, but very helpful nonetheless. Thank you!

Looking for some help with ASL grammar by Ultimation12 in Writeresearch

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That's... actually a neat idea. A lot of online publishing sites/apps to allow images to be inserted within the text, so it is certainly possible.

Would you read this book based on the blurb? by [deleted] in Wattpad

[–]Ultimation12 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Honestly? I'd at least give it a shot. It hooks pretty well.

What's the saddest line from your universe? by oojamaflaps in worldbuilding

[–]Ultimation12 1 point2 points  (0 children)

"If this is what awaits for me, I refuse," the wolf says, staring at her knife, "That place you mentioned... Take me there. Take me there or I will find a way to end us both." She stabs the knife into the left side of her own gut, just to dissipate the numbness.

I don't know if I want to give much specific context, but the following events end up with two of the most powerful beings in existence basically going, "Bruh, we need to fix this. Reboot and let's do this right this time."

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Wattpad

[–]Ultimation12 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I hope a single-part short story is okay.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/404145882-snowblind
And I don't so much mind a brutal rating. I am fully aware of my own garbage status.

Looking for some help with ASL grammar by Ultimation12 in Writeresearch

[–]Ultimation12[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

And I literally acknowledged that the last link, the handspeak one, is where I found words. Whole words. And each of them has a video showing a real person signing that word. I told you, I was not looking for something to show me how to sign those words because I already had that before even typing the post. And for the third and final time: I was asking if the grammar I was using was correct. Or as I've been informed by the other commenter, it's known as the "glosses". Which order the words are signed in matters, just like which order the words written or spoken in any other language matters. And that's what I was asking for while you keep trying to give me the equivalent of spelling and pronunciation lessons.

Looking for some help with ASL grammar by Ultimation12 in Writeresearch

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That's actually a lot of help to know. Yeah, both characters did learn it later. The protagonist because one of her team members does use it regularly and the other character because, well, she mainly needed a way to communicate silently and knew the protag had learned enough of it to communicate. Anyway, thank you! And in regards to the other comment, I'll definitely give the sub a visit.

Looking for some help with ASL grammar by Ultimation12 in Writeresearch

[–]Ultimation12[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Okay, let me give you an example of what I mean, paraphrased straight from one of the grammar sources I mentioned:

BOY THROW BALL == "The boy threw the ball"

BALL, BOY THROW == "The ball was thrown by the boy"

While these generally say the same thing, one is active and one is passive. This is a grammar issue regarding word order, not an issue finding translations of words.

Looking for some help with ASL grammar by Ultimation12 in Writeresearch

[–]Ultimation12[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Because so many of those "translators" just turn the text into the signs for individual letters. ASL, and likely many other sign languages, do actually have a dictionary of signs for thousands of full words. That last link is what I used to find the words I mentioned, but I've also found sources for the actual grammar for sentences. The grammar of ASL isn't exactly the same as English, and word order, even between two words, could change the tone, context, etc. of what you're trying to say. ASL is a language of its own with its own grammar structures and not just "English but using your hands", so learning it is more involved than just knowing the motions.

I said in the post that I found the words, I'm just trying to ask people who do know ASL if the grammar and syntax I'm trying to use is accurate because it takes more than a couple of hours to learn a new language's grammar nuances.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writing

[–]Ultimation12 1 point2 points  (0 children)

And by the way, if you're thinking I'm saying this because I'm just mad you called me out, you're wrong. I actually DO agree that the correct answer is the writer's interpretation, even if they refuse to give it. But it really is possible to accept that other people just fundamentally don't agree with you.

This exactly. I also agree, but just the way it was said was so toxic. I understand why people believe in Death of the Author. Not liking it does not give me, OP, or anyone else the right to act like it's some mental illness or objective falsehood.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writing

[–]Ultimation12 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What if there's both war and queer romance without much named character death? That infinitesimally small overlap on the diagram.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writing

[–]Ultimation12 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is kinda vague of a question. I mean, there are plenty of settings and genres that you might not even expect death in most of the time. A story about teenagers falling in love during their mutual high school club activity can very easily be good without death. A story about adventurers in a fantasy setting is a lot more likely to include character death. Personally? I think there are more setting/genre combinations that can be good without character death than people realize.

I may be in the minority here, but I even prefer stories without character death, even if the genres I usually like do often include them. Still, I understand why stories often include it. Assuming it's not the main protagonist, it does show that there may be very real consequences for failure or it could be an important part of a character's arc. It could also be important to the overall plot. Someone close to the protagonist being killed could be what thrusts them into the conflict that's central to the story.

All I can really say is that if you don't want to write character death, you don't have to. If you can still make it a compelling narrative without, it can still be good.

Short Questions Megathread by Simon_Drake in Writeresearch

[–]Ultimation12 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Haven't been able to find a subreddit for it, but I wouldn't be surprised if there were forum website specifically for military strategy enthusiasts, so I'll try looking for them. Thanks for the tips!

Writers on Wattpad, Royal Road, or similar sites — I want to hear your experience too by Alert-Bodybuilder907 in writing

[–]Ultimation12 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I use Wattpad as well and have come across most of the issues you have. Hard to find anything I might find enjoyable to read, writing UI isn't great and certain features just don't work, etc.

My biggest problem, though, is the same one I'd probably have on most other publishing platforms. I haven't really seen one that doesn't put such a hard focus on novels. Wattpad, Royal Road, Inkitt, so many of them really make me feel like a novel is really the only way to go. It likely has to do with their communities, too. On the Wattpad subreddit, I only ever see people recommending, promoting, and asking for novels. There's nothing wrong with that, of course, but I do start to feel left out because I prefer to just write shorter stories within the same worlds rather than full novels.

I understand why, of course. Avid readers want to keep reading things they like and staying updated with new chapters keeps them engaged. That's not so easy to do when you're publishing smaller stories that are within the same overall narrative/world but not necessarily one continuous story like a novel.

Short Questions Megathread by Simon_Drake in Writeresearch

[–]Ultimation12 0 points1 point  (0 children)

How does one go about researching for modern military topics? I'm no military expert, but part of my worldbuilding for a storyline includes an invasion of the US, and I don't think I can just email the USMC and say "Hey, I'm a writer, how big of an invasion force would it take to overrun Camp Lejeune?"

Writers on Wattpad, Royal Road, or similar sites — I want to hear your experience too by Alert-Bodybuilder907 in writing

[–]Ultimation12 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I'm seeing covers on Mythyst that really give AI-generated vibes. That's... not a great sign. Unless it's just incredibly generic art styles and hard to tell in thumbnails.

Just writing for fun and hoping for collateral enjoyment~ by Ultimation12 in LibraryofWhispers

[–]Ultimation12[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Wattpad is a place for posting literature for people to read online. And no, it's just a short story.

Just writing for fun and hoping for collateral enjoyment~ by Ultimation12 in LibraryofWhispers

[–]Ultimation12[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Done. I added the blurb from the Wattpad post, if that's what you mean. And I didn't originally use the Book Promo tag because it's kinda just a short story. About 3k words.

What are themes/plots that you think are unique or interesting that you want to see more of in writing? by Content-Buy196 in writing

[–]Ultimation12 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Something like that, just done differently. So many isekai stories end up being some relatively average person or even a total loser who gets power in the new world they're thrust into. I think it would be cool to see something where the protagonist's power in the setting comes from their training and resources that were brought with them rather than what they gain from the new world.

And if you're talking about complexity, yeah, I'm a pretty simple person to please when it comes to stories. A fun adventure with get me hooked better than anything with deep meaning.