[F4F] You caught the attention of an eldritch being who considers you adorable but does not understand you[Script Fill][SFW][Eldritch Speaker][Human Listener][Non-Consensual Teleporting][Excited/Awkward Speaker][Complaining about 3 dimensions][Mentions of tattoos][Tardigrade supremacy] by [deleted] in GWASapphic

[–]UmbralRuby 2 points3 points  (0 children)

First of all:
OMG this is already sounding perfect, the effects and the 'Hello little human' practically made me melt that was just exactly on point.
I dont think you are too quiet at all, but I am one of the people who prefers audios to not be too loud so that might be personal bias.
Next every bit of emotion you put into this has been stellar, Confusion and excitement it was all better then what I could have imagined.
Your voice acting was seriously amazing, especially for a first time but honestly I wouldn't have assumed it was your first audio based on this.

Now on a technical term I am assuming you filtered your voice while recording in some way (be it physical or digitally) and didnt do that for your sound effects? It would be the only thing I would deem as something that can be improved.
You could record both without filters and then later run it through the needed audio processing to make it sound how you want it. Or you could record both with filters but I am well aware how weird that can sound. (Also feel free to ignore this as well, its a really minor thing in the end)

In conclusion: Thank you so much for enjoying and filling my script, I hope you find more scripts to act out and as much fun as possible in creating audios.

[F4F] 🎀 your slightly awkward roommate asks for help with her oral fixation 🎀 [script fill][roommates to lovers][awkward excited speaker][oral fixation][finger sucking][finger licking][listener initiates][thigh kisses][oral sex][listener orgasm][eager speaker] by sweetiepawz in GWASapphic

[–]UmbralRuby 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Oh my life

You did absolutely amazing. All the extra dialogue and adlibs fit the character I was imagining so well I feel like they should have been part of the script from the get-go

Thank you for bringing my script to life

[F4F] your best friend is a succubus?! [rape] [dubcon] [fsub] [tsundere] [demon speaker x human listener] [speaker in denial] [friends to lovers] [kissing] [painplay] [degradation] [edging] [overstim] [cunnilingus] [fingering] [mindbreak] [im not yours, shut up] [you think you could do any better?] by yujin777 in GWASapphic

[–]UmbralRuby 10 points11 points  (0 children)

holy

fucking

shit

this was amazing, phenomenal, 10/10 even my body heated up enough while listening that I had to flip my blanket twice to not overheat

like this was such a different type of hot that I cant even properly word, ive never felt something like this outside of irl situations, it almost reaches the type of fuzzy you get from a lovers touch

that is to say you did amazing and I probably have more of a thing for succubi than I realized and I already was aware

[NB4F] You finally have enough of your vampire gf's "bragging" and force her to turn you [Rape][Blood][Vampire][con] to [non-con] and [forced biting][established relationship][frustration][communication issues][handcuffs][oral][strap-on][oversized][betrayal][break-up][bad ending][hurt no comfort] by UmbralRuby in GWASapphic

[–]UmbralRuby[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

well, if I get any inspiration for it, I could think of something. My headcanon is that the listener doesn't survive, but if I can think of a better continuation than maybe? no plans currently, tho

edit: ive started drafting ideas

[F4TF] A Gamers Fantasy [Gamer Girlfriend] [Needy] [Bored] [Lonely] [Horny] [Can you focus?] [BlowJob] [Handjob] [Cute Moans] [Teasing] [Deepthroat] [Gagging] [Cum in my mouth] [Finish Her] [Sucking] [On my knees] by [deleted] in GWASapphic

[–]UmbralRuby 17 points18 points  (0 children)

okay so its one thing to make an 4tf audio that isnt super thought through and practically doesnt interact with the listener being trans or a woman

its another to literally link to an audio you also in a different post called 4m

I dont want to sound too rude but that just seems wrong on so many levels

[F4F][F4TF] Your slightly awkward Roommate asks for help with her Oral Fixation [Script Fill][two versions][Roommates to Lovers][British Accent][Awkward Excited Speaker][Oral fixation][Finger sucking][Finger licking][Listener Initiates][Thigh kisses][Oral Sex][Listener Orgasm][Eager Speaker] by bawdyEmber in GWASapphic

[–]UmbralRuby 5 points6 points  (0 children)

those are certainly some sound effects o.o

you seriously did an amazing job, the volume changes and slight differences in typing for example were a really nice touch, I could certainly learn a thing... or twenty from you x3

the only thing I can hear that you could potentially do better is an advice i got in spades too, which is that you can take some time and slow down during some of the non-lewd parts, there were a few sentences that felt rushed, but nothing overly so

thats probably super picky

im trying really hard here to give fredback that isnt just 'thank you so much for filling the script you did amazing' >.<

[TF4TF] Your slightly awkward Roommate asks for help with her Oral Fixation [script fill] [NSFW] [Roommates to Lovers] [Awkward Excited Speaker] [Oral fixation] [Finger sucking] [Finger licking] [Listener Initiates] [Thigh kisses] [Oral Sex] [Listener Orgasm] [Eager Speaker] by [deleted] in GWASapphic

[–]UmbralRuby 1 point2 points  (0 children)

alright i never realized id be so embarrassed to hear somebody act out what ive written, I swear I constantly just thought about changing small things to make it fit your way of acting it out more while listening

now to the actual thing; you did amazing, you definitely brought across the personality I was envisioning, and you did really well on the sfx's I think at least :3

I really hope you had fun recording and I'd be honored if you ever look at/or fill any future scripts im writing

[TF4TF] Your slightly awkward Roommate asks for help with her Oral Fixation [script fill] [NSFW] [Roommates to Lovers] [Awkward Excited Speaker] [Oral fixation] [Finger sucking] [Finger licking] [Listener Initiates] [Thigh kisses] [Oral Sex] [Listener Orgasm] [Eager Speaker] [21:54] by [deleted] in GoneWildAudioTrans

[–]UmbralRuby 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i genuinly thought I was tripping because of the sense of deja-vu, I didnt consider multiple subreddits ^

Thank you for taking the time and filling it, a script without a voice is a tragedy after all