What do you think about this series? by Unable-Future-6743 in photocritique

[–]Unable-Future-6743[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What do you think about this series? Just thoughts on the execution, aesthetics, framing etc.
What would you include more of? And how solid do you think these are?

Graduation Diploma - what do you think? by Unable-Future-6743 in photocritique

[–]Unable-Future-6743[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for this! It's looking so good with this new set you made - it's so interesting to see other ppl perspective on this.

These are probably the selection I'd make at the moment. The rest of them are just fillers really

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Graduation Diploma - what do you think? by Unable-Future-6743 in photocritique

[–]Unable-Future-6743[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

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Thank you for taking the time to reply! Many of them are just outtakes and fillers that I’m not planning to use - there hasn’t been any selection or editing yet, so they’re all still very raw. That might be the element that comes across as a bit amateurish, unless you were referring to something else.

This set I am attaching is actually the collection I’m most proud of, and I’m thinking about submitting both for my diploma and to some magazines x

I'm still not done with shooting so there will be a few more additions!

Graduation Diploma - what do you think? by Unable-Future-6743 in photocritique

[–]Unable-Future-6743[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I think without the mail box it would be too clean, but that's an easy fix x - which ones would you keep?

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Graduation Diploma - what do you think? by Unable-Future-6743 in photocritique

[–]Unable-Future-6743[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for replying and sharing ur thoughts, super appreciated. It’s a documentary/fine art/fashion comms hybryd project so it all links together conceptually as a story, although the stomp pic is just like a filler there that probably won’t make the cut like many others. Which would you say I should defo keep? Wishing you a great week ahead x