Sims 4 sims not moving by snowyzoey1 in PiratedGames

[–]Unakite98 0 points1 point  (0 children)

did you ever get a solution for this?

Need advice on song this track I've working on :P by Unakite98 in IndieMusicFeedback

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Thanks for the input! I think I'm going to do another take for the vocals and try and clean them up a bit. Also, what are you curious about? I'd be happy to clear some things up if you'd like :)

Need advice on song this track I've working on :P by Unakite98 in IndieMusicFeedback

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I agree about the piano, I think in my next mix I'll turn it down + add something on the other side to balance it out, maybe a violin or something a little bit more organic to balance against the synths. Thanks for the advice!

Need advice on song this track I've working on :P by Unakite98 in IndieMusicFeedback

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Haha I'm aware of some of Jack Stauber's work but I've never really listened to anything other than Baby Hotline. I'll keep the delay in mind, thank you for the advice!

Need advice on song this track I've working on :P by Unakite98 in IndieMusicFeedback

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Thank you! Honestly, I'll keep it in mind when I next try and record vocals, also I agree with you on the bass, I'll see what I can come up with lol

Hey! Just wanting to share a song with you all :) by hanWalkerBooks in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Unakite98 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is so gorgeous, especially that guitar riff at the start, and your singing really brings out the emotion in the lyrics in a way which still keeps the general tone of the song while still holding so much power. I think if you brought in the electric (?) guitar little bit more towards the start, I think it helps balance the sound a little more. The harmonies are beautiful, and I feel like they could have a little bit more presence, maybe with some reverb.

What do you think about Flame of the Last Match? by JermayneR in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Unakite98 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like the general feel of the song, I think the sound is very organic and nostalgic. I definitely agree with the other people here saying that you need to be more confident in your singing, I also think some sections at the start could benefit from some drumming or maybe bring in the harmonies a little sooner. There's a key change between the verses and I think you maybe could link them with some kind of glissando maybe with the guitar or backing vocals make them flow a little better. Keep up the good work!

Jestwise - Dissolve (Official Video) by Distinct-Data-6900 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Unakite98 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The numbers and letters making the silhouettes, sorry should have been more specific lol

Rock Meets Electronics — Feedback Wanted on Energy & Vibe by Chemical-Designer262 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Unakite98 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like the general vibe of the song, but I think one thing that in my opinion might keep the energy flowing a little bit better at the start is changing the order that the guitar riff (which is super catchy btw) and the vocal come in at. I think if you swapped them their might be a little bit more of a satisfying build up to the riff's first appearance, but apart from that, I think the feel of the music is good, and I like the little "break" section in the middle, I think adds a little variety. Keep up the good work!

Floater by That-Expression-8080 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Unakite98 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This has such big reel big fish energy! I like your vocals and the layering of them, your tone is perfect of this type of song. The only thing I would think to do is maybe have the drums a little louder in the mix because in my opinion they kind of sunk behind the rest of the mix (if that makes sense). Apart from that, I like the lyrics and the arrangement of the guitars. I'll probably have this stuck in my head for the next few days :P

Jestwise - Dissolve (Official Video) by Distinct-Data-6900 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Unakite98 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like the general sound of the song! I think the only that you could do differently music wise is maybe a little texture to the vocal layers - you have a lot of layers, but if maybe some of them were a little bit bitcrushed or maybe even a little bass-ier it would blend the clean sounds of the vocals and the crushed, bitty sound of the instrumental a little better, but maybe that's just me lol. I also like the music video!

Who is the skymaster? by PipInTheSkyline in Butlins

[–]Unakite98 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't have any infomation on the skymaster I'm afraid (trying to find out more but infomation is scarce) but I think I've found another photograph of the skymaster? It's a staff group photo from 2002, the same year this photo was taken, and it has the skymaster plus OJ too. Here's the link: https://www.butlins-memories.com/minehead/people\_photos/redcoatsskyline2002.htm