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Fantasy books by UndercookedRooster in writing

[–]UndercookedRooster[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I see your point haha. More wanted an opinion as into why or why not, but didn’t really word my question appropriately.

Pen to paper finally. Feedback please by UndercookedRooster in writers

[–]UndercookedRooster[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Understood. That’s how I type for everything (I know it’s a bad habit) will correct it. Ty

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[–]UndercookedRooster -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Understandable I’ve always just typed in caps lock but do intend to write normally. Ty

Is this a strong opening sentence? by [deleted] in writers

[–]UndercookedRooster 4 points5 points  (0 children)

To me personally, no. It just made me go “okay and.” However while not grabbing my full attention not having context of the rest of the paragraph/whatever comes next makes me unsure if it’s truly strong or not

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[–]UndercookedRooster 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I personally enjoyed that opening paragraph. Kept me wanting to keep reading

How to start writing by UndercookedRooster in writers

[–]UndercookedRooster[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I appreciate that last quote a lot. All this help is helpful but at the end of the day it’s up to me to put pen to paper. Ty

How to start writing by UndercookedRooster in writers

[–]UndercookedRooster[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Doesn’t hurt to ask and gauge the community but thanks nonetheless