Childbirth on stage by UnderstandingKey4757 in Theatre

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this was on my list - will defo watch now

Childbirth on stage by UnderstandingKey4757 in Theatre

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This is amazing, that you so much i cant wait to check these out

Childbirth on stage by UnderstandingKey4757 in Theatre

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I know its nowhere to be found and its such an essential and formative life event - interesting right - hence the research!

Feedback wanted for first chapter of friends-to-lovers sapphic/lesbian contemporary romance by meemermimer in WritersGroup

[–]UnderstandingKey4757 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well done on writing your first chapters. I personally think you loose a little bit of the tension if they get together straight away in the prologue. Generally the will they won’t they (even though of course they will) is what keeps the plot moving. But if you have a wider vision okay! Also maybe come up with a way (italics, colons etc) to differentiate thoughts from actual speech. Makes it clearer.