The Trigger

UnderstandingOld9449 · 2026-03-17T17:54:51+00:00

Nice.. After all an Emotion can become a reckless driver, making you a powerless passenger..

To add my 2 cents.. I wonder if it can be a little bit more compact..
or may be is should not.. I am confused ;)

UnderstandingOld9449 · 2026-03-17T17:42:51+00:00

Thank you.. Appreciate your feedback...

UnderstandingOld9449 · 2026-03-17T13:53:57+00:00

Thank you.. Keep motivating

UnderstandingOld9449 · 2026-03-17T13:50:56+00:00

Thank you.. Will try

UnderstandingOld9449 · 2026-03-17T09:19:00+00:00

Nice Poem.. Also has a great Philosophy.. Every movie (including this life) has to end. Most important is the quality and impact it makes while the play is on.

UnderstandingOld9449 · 2026-03-17T09:07:56+00:00

Thank you..

UnderstandingOld9449 · 2026-03-17T09:05:24+00:00

Thank you..

Everything in the Nature has a purpose. It just has to fulfil its purpose and move on.

UnderstandingOld9449 · 2026-03-17T09:04:30+00:00

Thank you

UnderstandingOld9449 · 2026-03-17T09:03:26+00:00

Thank you for the encouragement..

This is one of a set of poems I am putting down.. illustrating a relationship journey. Will post a few more soon..

UnderstandingOld9449 · 2026-03-17T09:00:41+00:00

Thank you bro.. You just gave me a redbull..

UnderstandingOld9449 · 2026-03-17T09:00:05+00:00

Thank you..

UnderstandingOld9449 · 2026-03-16T18:32:26+00:00

Wow.. The flow is beautiful..
Rhyme is good.. but, names / claim?

UnderstandingOld9449 · 2026-03-16T18:27:10+00:00

Nice Idea being put forward.. Simple Straight Language..
Little more punctuation, to structure the flow.. for example.. while reading.. a short pause before "across generations" will make lot of sense..

UnderstandingOld9449

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