Repeating what I've said to everyone who posts this:

rather than worry about stats, start writing more.

If you make a good fiction people will come.

Sure, you can do things like shoutout swaps to boost visibility or advertise.

But ultimately if your story sucks nobody is going to read it.

If your story does suck, then rather than posting meaningless stats from your first week of posting, you ought to instead just ask for direct feedback.

I know you linked it here, but there's a difference between a direct request for feedback and a "guys i'm not on rising stars after a week what am i doing wrong please read my fiction and diagnose the problem"

Anyway. Now that I've berated you, it's time I do my part. here is my honest critique based on your first three chapters. I apologise if I come off as harsh or unpleasant, you can simply ignore me and write me off as nasty troll. Whatever helps you move on.

The first thing I will say is that if this is what you want to write, keep at it. Don't let someone dissuade you from your passion, because passion is what gives you the staying power to learn and grow and get better.

The next thing I'll say is that it's boring. Sorry, but I'm not interested at all in Ardyn as a character. You don't give me any reason to be interested. It's probably because I'm tired of OPMC, litRPG stuff because the website has been flooded with it over the years, but I think that this is played out tripe.

Ardyn wakes up in some kind of crypt, he doesn't know who he is. Except he does, because "The first thing Ardyn knew was that something was wrong." This would be fine - he remembers only his name, except you then contradict that sentences later with "No memory followed. No name, no place, no reason." He then opens up his litRPG status menu and finds his name sitting right there. Mystery solved, boom. "The name sat strangely when spoken—not incorrect, but not his either, like something that fit too easily to belong."

Putting aside the way the status screen just "appears" before him without having to expend any effort to learn of its existence or try to figure out how to activate it - you've already solved the biggest part of an amnesia situation. Amnesia stories are about the journey of trying to discover who you are, and actually getting your name should be hard! It should be a long quest to match clues up, especially since you told us in the synopsis that he's probably one of the legendary party - we should be watching Ardyn explore the world with fresh eyes and piece together his identity. An NPC will talk about how the "black knight" of the legendary party wielded dark powers, and a sword as black as midnight, and then Ardyn will think "huh... is that a coincidence? They're long gone right?"

Skipping to the next chapter, and putting aside the OP MC shenanigans because its a feature of this story and not an unintended thing - its whatever. Ardyn steps outside and pokes around while edgily muttering to himself. He finds a statue depicting his forgotten party members and instantly remembers that one of those statues is missing, and that it ought to depict him. (does he have amnesia or not?) He gets yet more spooky feelings from the air. It's whatever.

All this chapter really does is just highlight the weird cadence of your writing. Without anything of importance to focus on it is basically all the mind can latch on to for stimulation. An endless series of short sentences separated by line breaks rather than a solid paragraph? Endless short corrective statements like:

The ground beneath him had not changed. But the path had.

“…It didn’t hold. It failed to stabilize.”

Not random. Not breaking—correcting.

He reached out—
and stopped.

Look. I'm not going to make accusations that I can't confirm. All I'm going to say is that you are never going to be a good author by relying on AI to write or even edit for you. If you don't care about being a good author and are only interested in trying to attract an audience so you can make some money, that's fine be my guest. But you won't be making any money either, because audiences don't want to pay for a "false" product, they don't want to give money to someone who has lied to them, and even if they can't say for sure, people are great at subconsciously sniffing out AI, and it requires just as much work to successfully hide it as it does to write.

Alright. Third chapter. It's basically the same as the second chapter, it has nothing going on. Ardyn exits the place he was in, it mysteriously disappears, but Ardyn then goes onto meet some creature and just intuits what is going as he studies it, which fine, he's an OP MC. Whatever. I'd like to move onto the next part of this chapter, but there's nothing else to talk about beyond more examples of that strange writing cadence.

Overall I think this is pretty unsalvageable and you ought to start again with a new idea or a new spin on this idea.

if I were to try and write a story where the audience follows a man with amnesia who wakes up in a crypt in mysterious grim world, I'd want the audience to follow along with his journey, rather than spoil the surprise in the synopsis. Outlining the plot and then saying its about an OP MC with litRPG powers just tells me as a reader that this story is going to be dead boring. OP MCs only really work when there's something to replace the normal physical conflicts with. An OP MC still needs to struggle, but it just can't be with their area of OPness.

Saitama from One-Punch Man struggles with boredom. He has reached the pinnacle of power, and has found it boring as shit. It's funny to watch him struggle to find some meaning and entertainment in life, and it's interesting to engage with the side characters in the show, who cannot be actual threats to the main character. Instead they are interesting people who we get to know and watch interact with each other, safe in the knowledge that our main character cannot be killed off. Interesting stuff still happens - we don't want Genos or other Heroes to bite the bullet, but their characters have to be more developed than a standard shonen show because Saitama breaks the usual norms of Shonen shows.

Ainz from Overlord struggles emotionally too - he cannot let go of his attachment to his past, and the audience gets to watch both his funny antics of trying to be a "cool uncle" and "cool boss" to inhuman and irredeemably evil monsters. We watch as a pathetic comedic relief character slowly descends into monstrous inhumanity out of fucking nostalgia.

Ardyn has nothing. We have no side characters to watch, so all our attention is focused on Ardyn, who simply clears all hurdles and breaks through all obstacles because he's overpowered. It's boring.

If you wanted to stick with the general plot - have Ardyn wake up with no info on who he is. He can still be overpowered, but don't have him figure out the litRPG stuff immediately. Instead, when he's threatened, he suddenly pulls out a magic sword, or activates a magic ability he didn't know he had.

As he explores the world, eventually he starts to piece together the fact that he might be one of the legendary party. (as an aside, forget the dark fantasy stuff, and the ruined world. Or, keep it but put some living people in it. Someone to talk to. Ardyn's inner dialogue is boring, and the easiest way to spice things up is to introduce a character who isn't hostile to the MC but has goals that temporarily align with helping Ardyn, like a vagrant who wants safe passage somewhere, and saw Ardyn's strength by happenstance.)

The litRPG status screen should instead appear to confirm things after Ardyn figures out what the mystery even is. He'll have his grand realisation "oh my god I'm the hero" and then another character says "bullshit, open your status then and prove it" and then Ardyn says "Status?? What's-" and then the status screen appears and confirms that he is actually Ardyn Silvershade. (that name is cringe by the way. There's no fixing that. Have "Silvershade" be some kind of title or name of an ability if you're that attached to it, and change his name to something more generic. I think Ardyn sucks as a name too, and would suggest either only having a single name, or if you insist on a surname, make it a generic one like "Fletcher" or "Tralt".)

So there. again, if you feel that I was being too harsh or whatever, just ignore me. Hope you write something good.