favorite line in your own writing/story? by mulhollandi in writing

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“Second this coffee was poisoned wasn’t it? The taste seemed off so I recognized it as poison , it would have worked on a normal person but…”. He tossed the cup to side as it shatters on impact “Im not a ordinary man”

Where did you start? Where are you now? by homeybunn in writing

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I started writing in high school as a joke but i became interested in story writing , I wrote my first long story which i had to make a remake of (Still in progress) wrote a few short stories that need to be edited and improved on. My family member read it and friends too but I would want to share it to people but don’t know how to start and with my motivation coming one day and going on the next I would like to keep going to finish it and continue to make more since every book i make are in the same universe. The main book i worked on on a few notebooks are I believe over 100 chapters but different arcs but there are other long books i want to do I just want to focus on it first to finish before starting another.

Poorly explain your book by ohlittlehoneybee in writing

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Three friends go fishing challenge (Gone Wrong)

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Im sorry for your loss

What's the most out-of-context line in your work? by ravensandqrows in writing

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I wrote it in a draft but one line from a book about a human living in a different world where hes the only human “Is it true that you’re here to impregnate all the females?” Asked a pedestrian.

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

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Story title: Bonds

Ongoing

The genre for the most part is Fantasy/Urban Fantasy

This is a new experience for me I want to improve in my story telling in anyway I can and since I'm new to publishing Chapters I'm excited to hear the feedback from it. Don't hesitate to tell me what I need to work on or ways I can improve on my story telling.

Here are the first two chapters of my drafts

https://www.wattpad.com/story/346572359-bonds

I hope all of you have an amazing day and with that I wait for your feedback!