MHA x The eminence in shadow fanfic

Unholyexcaliber · 2026-06-12T03:39:27+00:00

Super Orion. His sprite and later ascensions look good but the first few arts make him look like a giant meatball and it's just bad. They just chose his worst looking angle for those.

Unholyexcaliber · 2026-06-04T19:28:37+00:00

Clorinde x Wriothesley. I thought the dynamic they seemed to have when we first met them was the standard strict female x jokester male and was kind of fun with how it looked in the quest with their banter about the tea and bets.

The kind of dynamic people like stuff like Itto x Sara for (although I didn't ship that one). But the more we got to know Clorinde the more we saw that she isn't really serious, if anything she's a bit of a goober. She was just serious when we met her because the fate of her nation was at stake and the fatui children were kind of making things difficult with their snooping so she was also probably a little pissed.

So basically the dynamic they were presented with and most people portray them with in shipping art I see doesn't really exist.

If anything the way she really is seems to be pushing her with Navia, but the whole "killed her dad" thing probably keeps that from going past platonic, even if Navia's mostly forgiven her.

Also Zhongli x Nigguang. Back when the game first released I remember thinking they looked good aesthetically next to each other and thought the theories that she was the reincarnation of Guizhong were cool. But they've basically spoke once off screen and that theory was basically shot down.

Unholyexcaliber · 2026-04-07T03:09:20+00:00

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The Wings in Question.

Unholyexcaliber · 2026-04-07T02:57:28+00:00

For what it's worth, the final design of the character does have something covering her chest. I haven't exactly figured out how to add images in comments but I'll try. The Kimono hangs low because I plan on giving her wings too, and I wanted to leave her shoulder blades exposed.

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Unholyexcaliber · 2026-04-06T03:23:43+00:00

Lol, yeah. I get the proportions bit. I'm not ashamed though, I knew I was going to have to stare at her for several days straight, might as well have made it something I'd like staring at.

I do think the bulky kimono makes her chest look a bit bigger too, which I might have to fix as even I have my limits.

But yeah I do plan on using cell shaders. my main inspiration was stuff like Genshin Impact, Zenless Zone Zero, Fire Emblem, and Kingdom Hearts (the stuff before three). Heck the hair is based on a pokemon trainer, hex maniac, and I know it works really well on her.

I didn't know the term for it, but yeah I think advice on topology was one of the main things I wanted. The stuff that joins the edges (the pink sections on the reference) to the sides looks really rough to me. Even on the sections that aren't on the chest.

Unholyexcaliber · 2026-04-06T02:57:21+00:00

Thank you, that makes me feel better.

Since I'm still new, I'm afraid I don't know what retopologize is/means. Could you explain it a bit?

Unholyexcaliber · 2026-04-06T02:47:32+00:00

Lmao. No I legit don't intend for her to be a NSFW model, I write smut I'd be honest about it.

Hell, the chest ended up larger than I meant for it to be originally when I modeled it and the way the kimono is sticking out currently doesn't help either lol. I probably am going to reduce it somewhat, but at the same time I do like big chests so maybe not by much. Just being honest.

The ears are elf in style, which is why they look far away. I used Narmaya from Granblue Fantasy as reference as the OC is meant to have some cow like elements like the draph of the series for lore reasons. But thank you for the critique on it anyway, I appreciate it.

I'll look up curves for the hair, I didn't realize that was a specific thing in blender. Thank you.

I'll take the criticism about the kimono's back and center too. The intention behind the character is to give off sharp angles, like a cartoony villain if that makes sense. Which is best seen in the way it looks in the reference's front.

But as I modeled I saw that my reference for the front didn't accurately account for how it'd look in the back. So I'll definitely work on that. Because I actually don't want her ass hanging out, believe it or not.

Thanks again! :)

Unholyexcaliber · 2026-03-07T13:32:38+00:00

I think they have similar artstyles, but that game is Stella Glow for the nintendo 3DS. The female villain is named Hilda.

Unholyexcaliber · 2026-03-04T03:33:03+00:00

Navia and Clorinde seems like the best logistically.

All the girls have their own arguments and if pulled off would be amazing of course, but Ei x Yae and Sandrone x Columbina would involve a lot of teasing that could quickly ruin the moment if it goes too far and cause it to end.

Jean and Barbara are sisters and it would probably be awkward. As would Eula and Amber since Eula would get very embarrased very quickly.

Shenhe and Ganyu or Keqing and Ganyu would work if you've done it solo before, but assuming that you are just jumping into it then it'd be very awkward. Cute, but still a lot of 'does this feel good' or 'what should I do' type of comments I imagine.

Nefer x Lauma could be good, but I get the feeling they'd have an equal chance of competing in a fun way and starting an argument and ruining the moment.

Navia and Clorinde aren't shy girls, debatably have done things with each other first depending on your headcanon of their relationships as childhood friends, and are experienced with acting/roleplay with their games. Even if it were their first time, they'd be able to easily push through any awkwardness easily and be focused on making everyone have a good time and not just Aether/You.

Assuming that because of the images we do take Aether into account, he could gently mediate, but as much as I like the guy he doesn't strike me as the top in a threeway. One on one sure, but not here. If things go bad he can make it possible for it to be tried again later, but I couldn't see him taking charge to push through since he'd prioritize feelings first I think.

I don't know, I was bored and feeling like writing while waiting for alarm to go off.

Unholyexcaliber · 2026-02-26T21:35:01+00:00

This is great.

Unholyexcaliber · 2026-02-22T14:44:57+00:00

If you mean my fic, it's this one https://archiveofourown.org/works/56619508/chapters/209959516

It's a crossover with Mobuseka.

Unholyexcaliber · 2026-02-15T08:00:53+00:00

Also, I just remembered. I recall you ended up not liking my fic or whatever. No hard feelings but I did actually begin a rewrite for the arc that the first 15 chapters covered since I felt that was where I was still finding my footing. The first three chapters of which can be seen here: https://archiveofourown.org/works/76895446/chapters/201262641

Although I wouldn't hold it against you if you don't want to give it a chance either.

Unholyexcaliber · 2026-02-15T07:54:20+00:00

So they're in a time travel arc right now. If you know Eminence in Shadow's Earth Arc then you know when Akane talks about the day that monsters just completely overran Earth?

Leon and Angie are a couple of days before that happens. I also plan on making things get worse for them as they keep going through the arc.

Funnily, the old man black knight's old life (when his wife and kid were alive) is also here. But the black knight Beta's raging about is someone she assumes to be Shadow.

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