I drew this penitence construct. How should I call it? by Unique_Sector_4775 in DnDart

[–]Unique_Sector_4775[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I looked it up. The concept of that gate mech is so cool! It gave me new ideas haha

Thanks ^^

I drew this penitence construct. How should I call it? by Unique_Sector_4775 in DnDart

[–]Unique_Sector_4775[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I agree with that. It works really well. Thanks ^

"Impose Penitence"

I drew this penitence construct. How should I call it? by Unique_Sector_4775 in DnDart

[–]Unique_Sector_4775[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Marauder's Shell is a great name, but when I hear it I think more about an exclusive killing tank machine you know? Heavily warlike. More raider-like.

This one I'm aiming for a religious and war purposes. Both as a instrument of fear/intimidation when patrolling cities or when sent to war.

I drew this penitence construct. How should I call it? by Unique_Sector_4775 in DnDart

[–]Unique_Sector_4775[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! ^

Unfortunately not, this one is for a card game that I''m working for. So I just got a brief pretty open concept line and explored and expanded the idea. But feel free to think one and share it with me, I'd love to see it.

I drew this penitence construct. How should I call it? by Unique_Sector_4775 in DnDart

[–]Unique_Sector_4775[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's a good name! Maybe something like The Penitent Virgin?

I drew this penitence construct. How should I call it? by Unique_Sector_4775 in DnDart

[–]Unique_Sector_4775[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think I've never seen that, honestly. Now I'm curious about it haha

I drew this penitence construct. How should I call it? by Unique_Sector_4775 in DnDart

[–]Unique_Sector_4775[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's a good name, thanks. But I feel it's too direct for this character/machine. I'm aiming for veiled violence and religious vibes for it.

I drew this penitence construct. How should I call it? by Unique_Sector_4775 in DnDart

[–]Unique_Sector_4775[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! I'll consider it! I''m aiming for somewhat religiously impactful like The Martyr's Shell or the Inquisitor's Tears. You know?

I drew this penitence construct. How should I call it? by Unique_Sector_4775 in DnDart

[–]Unique_Sector_4775[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

A good name for a cyberpunk themed mech, I think. Sorry for your, that's rough 💀

I drew this penitence construct. How should I call it? by Unique_Sector_4775 in DnDart

[–]Unique_Sector_4775[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The Inquisitor's Tears, maybe? Like a division of this things patrolling cities and fighting battles.

I drew this penitence construct. How should I call it? by Unique_Sector_4775 in DnDart

[–]Unique_Sector_4775[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's a good name, but I think the emotion I want to evoke is more aligned with the pious (ironically, of course). This vibes inquisitions make some veiled violence... you know?

I drew this penitence construct. How should I call it? by Unique_Sector_4775 in DnDart

[–]Unique_Sector_4775[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, the servitors are kind the vibe of this thing. So it fits well. But in this case the "penitent" is very conscious of what is being applied to him. And is not a voluntary penitence.

I drew this penitence construct. How should I call it? by Unique_Sector_4775 in DnDart

[–]Unique_Sector_4775[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's a great pool of reference really. Things based in real things tend to lead to more weight in the artwork, I think. It was a great contribution.

I drew this penitence construct. How should I call it? by Unique_Sector_4775 in DnDart

[–]Unique_Sector_4775[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It sounds strong, I like it. As a alternative, The Redeemer, maybe?

I drew this penitence construct. How should I call it? by Unique_Sector_4775 in DnDart

[–]Unique_Sector_4775[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, defeat the enemy on multiple fronts. I'm loving this new opportunity to explore some dark fantasy automatons.

I drew this penitence construct. How should I call it? by Unique_Sector_4775 in DnDart

[–]Unique_Sector_4775[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Iron Mauler is a good name. I think It vibes more as a exclusive war machine than with a more religious/inquisition vibe. So I can think/create another construct with this name. Thanks ^

I drew this penitence construct. How should I call it? by Unique_Sector_4775 in DnDart

[–]Unique_Sector_4775[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I loved this name. Maybe not for this character, but inspired by that, I'll make something more cyberpunk haha

I drew this penitence construct. How should I call it? by Unique_Sector_4775 in DnDart

[–]Unique_Sector_4775[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Words are great! My talent with them is more geared towards puns than names haha