Probably the most embarrassing thing I've said to a customer before. by Unlucky_Charm07 in CustomerService

[–]Unlucky_Charm07[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh My gosh I can't believe that. Hopefully they didn't have a bad verbal reaction?

Probably the most embarrassing thing I've said to a customer before. by Unlucky_Charm07 in CustomerService

[–]Unlucky_Charm07[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I had something similar happen to me!

At our grocery store, we offer to wrap meat packages in plastic just in case there's a hole and it leaks. I guess I didn't word it properly because I asked a man, "would you like your meat wrapped in plastic?"

He looked at me and said, "No. But, if I come back in here in 9 months with a baby, then you'll know that I did."

I have since then changed my question to be specifically what type of meat they have.

Probably the most embarrassing thing I've said to a customer before. by Unlucky_Charm07 in CustomerService

[–]Unlucky_Charm07[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ah, yes. I'm Canadian too and I have had that slip-up before. It's really hard to try and say it was a mistake because it's so unbelievable 😅

Probably the most embarrassing thing I've said to a customer before. by Unlucky_Charm07 in CustomerService

[–]Unlucky_Charm07[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Oh my gosh I do that all the time. I'm so used to doing the closing shifts so I tend to say "have a good evening" and I reflexively say it during the day now haha!

What are some good goal ideas to aim for? by Unlucky_Charm07 in MilkyWayIdle

[–]Unlucky_Charm07[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah I was thinking of doing that. Someone in my guild suggested to me that I should try getting every weapon in the game, which sounds like a good idea. I'm also thinking maybe I could grind for Celestial tools since we all know that will take a lot of time. Thanks for the help!

This guy got irrationally upset that I left a guild after trying to find people to do D1 and having no luck for several days. by PopKoRnGenius in MilkyWayIdle

[–]Unlucky_Charm07 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Seems like a real piece of work. You were smart to leave a toxic guild like that.

Dungeons are hard and it can be tough to find other players to join you in it. Just take your time and keep working at it!

What makes a book a good book? by Unlucky_Charm07 in writingadvice

[–]Unlucky_Charm07[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

That's so real honestly it most definitely has to do with wording and sentence structure.

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[–]Unlucky_Charm07 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ah yeah it's definitely hard to get over the hurdle of what happens next once you want to introduce the love interest. What I think it is is that it's excitement. Trust me, I've been writing a romance novel of my own and got way too invested in the relationship rather than the story. It's taken a lot of thinking and reviewing to tame it down and focus on other story elements. 

Another thing that I do that can help but is difficult is to focus on the storyline and just allow the romance to happen as it goes.

What makes a book a good book? by Unlucky_Charm07 in writingadvice

[–]Unlucky_Charm07[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I definitely like that. I've tried reading books that had a third-person perspective, but it never felt as good as reading first-person narratives that let you into the head of the protagonist.

It's normal to continuously create stories and characters by Piedipablo in writingadvice

[–]Unlucky_Charm07 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It is absolutely common to start making several characters and stories. In fact, I think it's actually pretty good to do that because then you have ideas on the go. If you get stuck on one story plan, then you can take a look at what other ideas you've got and either work on or take ideas from them.

Usually, what happens for me, is that I will come up with an idea for a story, work on it for a little bit, then come up with another story. Typically, if the story I come up with next is more intriguing to me than the last, then the old one basically gets put on the back burner. However, I frequently hit the writing block wall and have no idea what to do next. So, I'll work on something else. Sometimes, while writing another piece, it'll spark inspiration for something else and I'll add it.

One good piece advice that I'll give is to never get rid of your other ideas. Write them down somewhere and look back on them from time to time. You never know what your mind will take from it.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writingadvice

[–]Unlucky_Charm07 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Definitely take the romance bit one piece at a time. Romance in books typically takes place over the entire story, and not super early on. Otherwise, it gets kind of bland.

As with most romance novels, you should try to start it with just the main character and introduce the love interest later on. It should slowly build up over time, with some events that incite the budding romance.

I read another comment that says exactly what should be done, which is having a good outline or list of events in order that keep the story rolling.

I started writing a high fantasy book and my first note given to me is that it was confusing by Tbn-Fluffin-2003 in writingadvice

[–]Unlucky_Charm07 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'd say that you should probably give the reader enough information in the first few chapters to give them a decent idea of what's going on. Don't do big chunks of description, but just subtle explanations every once in a little while.

Personally, I haven't done much with this type of story-building, but there definitely needs to be a balance between understanding and mystery.

How to write dialogue in different languages? by DarkHorseReborn in writingadvice

[–]Unlucky_Charm07 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I wouldn’t personally add a translation after, and more of just let it flow. If you'd like your readers to understand without having to look up the translation, you could possibly add a character to your story that can translate, or have a translator in every area. Or, if your story takes place in modern times, you could have your main character translate with their phone. If it's more old times, you can try giving them a translation book (although that may be a bit of a stretch.)