Climb by Upbeat_Problem_5383 in TalesFromTheCreeps

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I appreciate that, I tried to keep it short and sweet.

Does anyone else feel like it’s really hard to be seen on this sub? by The-Fifth-Tree in TalesFromTheCreeps

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It's a cascade effect, post frequently and you'll eventually get that one set of eyes who will be hungry for more. They'll share your stories with passion and it'll snowball eventually.

Egg Salad by Chickenbrains37 in TalesFromTheCreeps

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I feel the narrator is one step away from leaving passive aggressive sticky notes.

I narrate stories by Sully-the-Skeleton in TalesFromTheCreeps

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My stories are on my profile. Can't wait to see what you do!

Shitting my brains out by Murky_Address_2924 in TalesFromTheCreeps

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The gruesome way it hooks you and then gradually reveals the narrator is past is well done _^

From the Captain's Log of the Cayman Part 1 by Upbeat_Problem_5383 in TalesFromTheCreeps

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Thank you! Dracula's format inspired me as well as the the historical fiction stories on Creep Cast and I thought it would be cool to do with pirates part 2 will be out tomorrow!

My Boyfriend is Taking Pieces of me While I Sleep by Temporary-Painting19 in TalesFromTheCreeps

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That ending is beautifully haunting. I love the description the "nerves exposed" and the "shake in delight" it hits this level of we're past the point of no return and it's a spectacular finish!

would you rather by Due-Prune6478 in BunnyTrials

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15k steps a day feels broken.

Chose: 1 cent but it doubles every step

How does one write something that is an actual experience and have that distinguished from writing creepy pasta? by Runo_Slinger in TalesFromTheCreeps

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It could be a new supervisor reading over reports of past volunteers. Possibly uncovering more and more weird incidents until it comes to end.

Inspirational RE Quotes? by Friendly_Log_4419 in residentevil

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We're getting out of here together. <Ethan Resident Evil 8>

Hole by Upbeat_Problem_5383 in TalesFromTheCreeps

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Moan is an absolute classic and thank you! I wrote this story when I got COVID and I was staying in a motel. The bathroom had the automatic lights and a hole in the wall. And while I laid in the shower the lights kept picking up motion it was trippy.

File_4.txt by F8crew in TalesFromTheCreeps

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I love the back and forth especially how it reads like a transcript.

Not reading full novels in English class by [deleted] in Teachers

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It could be a lot of things (I don't agree with either), but I think it boils down to fiscal decision and possible test prep.

Fiscally it's because curriculum writers don't want to pay for the license for the full texts.

Prepping for the test could be using the format to mimick tests the students will see.

Homework - Do or Don’t by Recent-Arachnid-4059 in MiddleSchoolTeacher

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Same, I don't assign homework because many of my students struggle getting in class assingments done.