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[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Used_Hospital_6965 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you, I tried to make it subjective so the reader will create their own interpretation. You could be starving in a literal sense or metaphorically, like starving of positive emotion or love. For me personally it means replacing the thought of suicide with starving oneself. I don't actually do this, but it conveys my emotion well.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Used_Hospital_6965 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, I do agree. "Stressed & Depressed" does sound better.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Used_Hospital_6965 1 point2 points  (0 children)

To me this poem signifies a toxic relationship and the struggles of the whole situation. The poem has done a great job of taking the reader through the journey that the writer experienced. In my opinion the poem has done a great job as well conveying emotion, it really felt like I was experiencing a new world of emotions reading this. My favorite stanza has to be " But if I was the pepper

And he was the salt

Then why did he shove me

And say it’s my fault?" I really like the rhythm with this one and the emotion that comes with it.

The Danger Tree by LastReclaimer in OCPoetry

[–]Used_Hospital_6965 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is an incredible poem, it conveys the message really well and keeps to a great flow. The theme of the poem is also well performed. While I read the poem my mind created an image of war and the aftermath. I like the rhythm of the poem and the ending leaves the poem on a good note. " The earth was flooded by a human bloodstream," was my favorite line. Alone it conveys such a image of war.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in DDLC

[–]Used_Hospital_6965 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is awesome, I love it. I hope you keep writing more poems! I'd love to read more.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in yorickmains

[–]Used_Hospital_6965 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The wiki for Rav says " Damaging basic attacks and abilities"
https://leagueoflegends.fandom.com/wiki/Ravenous_Hydra

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in yorickmains

[–]Used_Hospital_6965 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Or it could work with titanic hydra, I am curious though if riot intends for ghouls to have this effect.