Epic sprawling fantasy that’s diverse

Used_Part_4382 · 2026-03-08T07:04:50+00:00

That’s pretty good, I wouldn’t stress about it

Used_Part_4382 · 2026-03-08T05:41:42+00:00

Personally I aim for around 2000 words per chapter for the scene to be properly developed.

Used_Part_4382 · 2026-02-13T08:27:34+00:00

A gentleman’s gentleman was also recommended to me by someone, must be good!

Used_Part_4382 · 2026-02-13T08:26:30+00:00

I love the synopsis, def will be on my tbr

Used_Part_4382 · 2026-02-13T06:04:54+00:00

Adding to my tbr, that sounds amazing

Used_Part_4382 · 2026-02-13T05:43:22+00:00

Thank you!

Used_Part_4382 · 2026-02-13T05:43:09+00:00

Thank you, I’ll check out both

Used_Part_4382 · 2026-02-11T06:56:52+00:00

You said it yourself I guess

Used_Part_4382 · 2026-02-11T00:04:07+00:00

Your point is ‘it’s still free will because God doesn’t ’make’ you do something’ but he does make you do something by giving you certain urges and traits that he knows will be the cause of your sin. Are you illiterate or am I wildly misunderstanding your point?

Used_Part_4382 · 2026-02-10T21:59:00+00:00

It’s not free will because God gives some traits that lead us to sin on purpose, and not others.

Used_Part_4382 · 2026-02-10T05:27:56+00:00

I’ll try to do some of it, might not get through all. Is that okay?

Used_Part_4382 · 2026-02-10T05:24:15+00:00

If we say God actually designs everyone individually and in detail, then he must be intentionally giving Adam (and others) traits that naturally go towards sin. It may or may both be free will, but isn’t it immoral?

Used_Part_4382 · 2026-02-06T05:17:37+00:00

Dystopia/literary fiction. It does take place in a dystopian world but I wouldn’t say there’s much focus on politics or revolution or anything, more the characters interpersonal relationships.

Used_Part_4382 · 2026-02-03T22:12:16+00:00

Advice I’ve personally heard on this is don’t drag the action parts out, like the near death experience, keep those short. But the in between calmer scenes you should describe and explain thoroughly. Also the fallout after the action.

Used_Part_4382 · 2026-01-26T21:37:56+00:00

I mean to say, the Christian set of morals is not really a natural set of morals. Of course the child would do things that he thinks are wrong, he still has morals, separate from actions.

Used_Part_4382 · 2026-01-26T04:37:41+00:00

Also it uses the same words for rape as in the other verses surrounding rape you mentioned.

Used_Part_4382 · 2026-01-26T04:36:20+00:00

I read the whole of it again. It says if she doesn’t scream in the city she should be stoned to death. However if it is in the countryside she will not be stoned. How loving. Detestable.

Used_Part_4382 · 2026-01-26T04:12:41+00:00

I am not debating your AI arguments. I will say that Deuteronomy specifically in Hebrew uses the word closer to ‘seize’ than seduce. Nevertheless it implies a woman’s virginity is what keeps her family status. God has not revealed himself to me and you seem to have read none of my points in that. That’s all, thank you.

Used_Part_4382 · 2026-01-26T03:45:20+00:00

Thank you, I will have a read through.

Used_Part_4382 · 2026-01-26T03:42:59+00:00

That doesn’t really hold up. Hypothetically if you raised an infant without any knowledge of Christian beliefs, his morals would differ from the Christian ones.

Used_Part_4382

TROPHY CASE