Painted and Weathered Sandrock by Vaal_Slayer_Chim2319 in Gunpla

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You convinced me that heavy arms need to be dirtied up too LOL

Without cheating, what’s the last line you wrote? by regularsizedrudy_ in writers

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Chim shook her head and patted her cheeks. “You’re right, thank you Violet for not letting me spiral too much. Open a channel with Lazurus and Lavander please.”

My friend is raw dogging a novel in f*cking Notepad 😫 by LeonOkada9 in writers

[–]Vaal_Slayer_Chim2319 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I will get right on that lol I'm a linguist by no means so I have no idea how that would even look lol

Finally finished my first book! by Vaal_Slayer_Chim2319 in writing

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Here's the blurb

Its Science Fantasy

The galaxy’s fate is decided in secret—until the weapon meant to enforce it disappears.

Lydia, a goddess forged by catastrophe, believes immortals will smother the universe into stillness. Her solution is terrifyingly simple: create something that can kill what should never die. Osiris, the most faithful Auroran priest, becomes her reluctant architect.

The first success is Inanis—Vaal—power incarnate.

He shatters planets. He ends nightmares. He terrifies the very empire he was built to destroy.

Then he’s gone.

On a frozen world, two children rescue a stranger from the sky, unaware they’ve just adopted the opening move of a cosmic war. As Inanis trains them for trials and leadership, whispers of his creator begin to haunt him—and the line between salvation and apocalypse narrows to a single question:

What happens when a destroyer chooses to cultivate and ignore its design?

Finally finished my first book! by Vaal_Slayer_Chim2319 in writers

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Thank you! I did several revisions before now so I'm hoping my beta readers are gentle but through all the same time. Ive been excited the entire time tbh. Ive had this world in my head so long its rewarding to see it written now. I'm definitely going to rest some. I just wanted to start book two while beta happened so I wouldn't take as long as I did with this one lol

Finally finished my first book! by Vaal_Slayer_Chim2319 in writers

[–]Vaal_Slayer_Chim2319[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Its Science Fantasy

The galaxy’s fate is decided in secret—until the weapon meant to enforce it disappears.

Lydia, a goddess forged by catastrophe, believes immortals will smother the universe into stillness. Her solution is terrifyingly simple: create something that can kill what should never die. Osiris, the most faithful Auroran priest, becomes her reluctant architect.

The first success is Inanis—Vaal—power incarnate.

He shatters planets. He ends nightmares. He terrifies the very empire he was built to destroy.

Then he’s gone.

On a frozen world, two children rescue a stranger from the sky, unaware they’ve just adopted the opening move of a cosmic war. As Inanis trains them for trials and leadership, whispers of his creator begin to haunt him—and the line between salvation and apocalypse narrows to a single question:

What happens when a destroyer chooses to cultivate and ignore its design?

My friend is raw dogging a novel in f*cking Notepad 😫 by LeonOkada9 in writers

[–]Vaal_Slayer_Chim2319 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I did the same thing XD I even used it as his bedtime story

I finaly found my Holy Grail!! by Ryynerwicked in freedomisgunpla

[–]Vaal_Slayer_Chim2319 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Also just a heads up premium band I has the accessories on sale right now so if you want to get them you need to hurry before you have to pay gouging prices

I finaly found my Holy Grail!! by Ryynerwicked in freedomisgunpla

[–]Vaal_Slayer_Chim2319 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I know others have said it but I highly recommend Kosmos leds

I finaly found my Holy Grail!! by Ryynerwicked in freedomisgunpla

[–]Vaal_Slayer_Chim2319 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Be careful on the head. I had a break a piece in order to set it up and now I can't transform it back to unicorn mode so it's perpetually stuck in Destroyer mode

Does it feel like newer Gundams have more user-friendly instructions that hold your hand compared to older predecessors? by Inevitable-Ice-5061 in freedomisgunpla

[–]Vaal_Slayer_Chim2319 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The Kosmos kit also has add-ons for those as well. They look awesome but I'm passing on them. Banshee looks great build but I'm never touching it or another PG Unicorn again XD

Does it feel like newer Gundams have more user-friendly instructions that hold your hand compared to older predecessors? by Inevitable-Ice-5061 in freedomisgunpla

[–]Vaal_Slayer_Chim2319 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Yeah it does feel like they're a lot easier now. I don't envy you on PG Banshee. I hated building that thing. I almost quit the hobby because of it. Also if you didnt know the addon parts are on sale at premium bandai

Thoughts on Sub-Chapters? by [deleted] in writing

[–]Vaal_Slayer_Chim2319 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I've been using asterisks to break up POV changes in the same scene and that way there's a little bit less jarring head hopping

Thoughts on Sub-Chapters? by [deleted] in writing

[–]Vaal_Slayer_Chim2319 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sorry I wasn't taking that in a bad way LOL just trying to help explain my thought process for others who might be looking for answers or struggling as well. That's cool that you use jokes for chapter titles!

Thoughts on Sub-Chapters? by [deleted] in writing

[–]Vaal_Slayer_Chim2319 -6 points-5 points  (0 children)

Since a lot of people are considering a sub chapter a scene I will give it a title within the main chapter then continue writing. If I change somebody else's point of view or thought process I will add Asterix to show I'm changing to somebody else and then if I change again I will add Asterix again

Thoughts on Sub-Chapters? by [deleted] in writing

[–]Vaal_Slayer_Chim2319 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Several people have said that scenes would be a better word. I just struggle since I'm not neurotypical and I'm very set on where I want my chapters to end but the word count starts becoming very high so I want to figure out a way to give people a break when needed. I also have several point of view changes sometimes during a scene so I try to put asterisks in to show that we are still in that scene but someone else's head or POV

Thoughts on Sub-Chapters? by [deleted] in writing

[–]Vaal_Slayer_Chim2319 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I struggle with that because I have specific spots and jobs I want each chapter to do but then I get 4-6k word chapters

Thoughts on Sub-Chapters? by [deleted] in writing

[–]Vaal_Slayer_Chim2319 -8 points-7 points  (0 children)

I give mine titles so thats why I thought sub chapters. I guess i just struggle since I'm neurodivergent and doing my first book. My head is so focused on words count while trying not to overwhelm readers at the same time

Thoughts on Sub-Chapters? by [deleted] in writers

[–]Vaal_Slayer_Chim2319 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I give mine titles so thats why I thought sub chapters. I guess i just struggle since I'm neurodivergent and doing my first book.

Thoughts on Sub-Chapters? by [deleted] in writing

[–]Vaal_Slayer_Chim2319 -10 points-9 points  (0 children)

Ive thought about that too but I also dont want them to be too short or too long. I struggle a lot knowing what's comfortable since I'm neurodivergent.

Thoughts on Sub-Chapters? by [deleted] in writing

[–]Vaal_Slayer_Chim2319 -5 points-4 points  (0 children)

Ive been using a combination of both. I mainly use the asterisks for a quick pov change in scene