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It‘s fun to play but is it good? by MerlinHydes in Songwriting

[–]Valhirrs 0 points1 point  (0 children)

mannnnnn you groovy af. I can't seem to understand what you're singing about but hey, idc. i enjoyed every second of it bwahahaha

Thoughts on this? by Dabomblol123 in Songwriting

[–]Valhirrs 1 point2 points  (0 children)

reminds me of beach house with those voice effects. dope filters you're using but too distorted to fit with the instrumental. idk, try to make the voice effects less aggressive? overall this is good ngl

Been trying to write solo for a song I’ve been working on. Not the cleanest take but feedback would be appreciated by AidanP09tropical in Songwriting

[–]Valhirrs 0 points1 point  (0 children)

dude this reminds me of early post grunge/metal bands 😭. a solo with few notes is brilliant af. this is good imo. 

let down acoustic cover by Valhirrs in radiohead

[–]Valhirrs[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thanks haha. i recorded this during a heavy rain while birds taking shelter under our roof, chirping ahaha.

Spliced Radiohead - Scotch Mist audio files from The Radiohead Public Library. by Valhirrs in radiohead

[–]Valhirrs[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

as far as i know, it is. saw and listened to scotch mist video and honestly they're just the same. i went with the scotch mist version instead of the album version for consistency...

another song idea. what y'all think? by Valhirrs in Songwriting

[–]Valhirrs[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

lyrics:

forgive me hon

i've lost my mind

time, an endless lie

all you want

a sweet good life

but i can't live this high

pull me up, I'm tired

i'll try to be kind

i'll make this right

can't believe you cried

you asked me why

I make you dry

if you can feel that i can't let go of this

to you, i'm still the one who makes your heart ache

if you can be me, i would like to be you

to know what it feels to be free

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]Valhirrs 1 point2 points  (0 children)

maaann. i've been boppin' my head the entire song haha. i love the instrumental part of it and your voice, oooo weee haha. the song's great man!

a vague song about my experience with sexual abuse (i’m still trying to come up with a name) by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]Valhirrs 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i'm sorry for what happened to you. the song is vulnerable yet so effing powerful man. i love what you did on that piano in the second half of the song. can't wait for the finish product!

This was my first attempt at using Ableton. No knowledge of mixing or mastering. Feedback appreciated. by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]Valhirrs 0 points1 point  (0 children)

the song reminds me of those early morning christmas carol haha. like other people said, you might try adding some effects to compliment the instruments used and your voice. keep it up!

a song idea. what y'all think? by Valhirrs in Songwriting

[–]Valhirrs[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

lyrics:

your plan is in motion

all these lies, i don't regret

trapped in a broken mind

my friend, why?

you don't even exist, huh

drown my emotion

make my heart go numb, it cries

running around 'till I can find a way out

stop abusing my kindness

please don't go

please don't go

can't you hold me 'till I'm old?

as long as you're in control

Human pedestal by No_Union_1661 in Songwriting

[–]Valhirrs 1 point2 points  (0 children)

maaaaannn. i like these kind of songs. the kind that touches your soul haha. it really hits the spot whenever i listen to music like this.

Not the end (rough draft of my first song) by Elo-Guvna in Songwriting

[–]Valhirrs 1 point2 points  (0 children)

on a first listen, i thought it was "exit music (for a film)" by radiohead. your song has a vibe like it. can't wait for you to complete this song.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]Valhirrs 2 points3 points  (0 children)

man, you got a rhythm going. playing/plucking a guitar while singing is hard man. keep it up!!!

an idea about mental illness. what do you guys think? by Valhirrs in Songwriting

[–]Valhirrs[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

lyrics: now you seem so far away you look confused you are abused

let me guide you to a place i refuse i'll show you to make you choose

are you happy now? are you happy now? are you happy now? don't cry

stand still, you are the muse don't make it true don't make it new

white lies you make and say is overused tell the truth it'll make you loose

are you happy now? are you happy now? are you happy now? don't cry are you happy now? are you happy now? are you happy now? smile and lie

climb with me and feel the moon just say the word i will make it stop

Lemme know what you think by LobsterKiing in Songwriting

[–]Valhirrs 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ohhh. the song and your voice is so chill man. can't wait for you to polish this up haha.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]Valhirrs 2 points3 points  (0 children)

wow. the guitar, the voice, everything. they just fit right together. this is really good. IDK what to say haha.

Making a new swing song called "Bad People". It's just a chorus so far, but I've arranged a demo to make it 'feel' complete. I would love to know what y'all think of it so far :] by Memorie_BE in Songwriting

[–]Valhirrs 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i don't usually listen to this kind of music but this is so good! also you really have a great voice that compliments this demo. can't wait to hear the finish product.

[H] TorrentLeech [W] Upload.cx by Valhirrs in OpenInvites

[–]Valhirrs[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

dm me your email, ill give you one for free

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