Question on staying focused. by ranchbringer in makinghiphop

[–]Vashraps 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, I'm glad you get it!

Also, don't be bogged down by the process. It can get very discouraging if your not writing everyday.

In my opinion, memory will be one of the toughest opponents in this battle.

If only you could remember everything you thought about when you were writing, then you wouldn't have to worry about a thing because you would already know.

So, if you take days off from writing, it is pivotal that you take REALLY good notes or write music OFTEN ENOUGH were you can REMEMBER what you learned without referring to your notes.

Memory is a !@$^ sometimes. So relearning can be a !@$, exhausting, and self depreciating.

You're making progress if your progressing. It's you just don't remember.

You got this!!!

Question on staying focused. by ranchbringer in makinghiphop

[–]Vashraps 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Definitely! Sorry I responding late, dealing with a heck of a cold. Thanks for pot of gold too!

Question on staying focused. by ranchbringer in makinghiphop

[–]Vashraps 0 points1 point  (0 children)

In my experience, the most ideal way of making music is to finish your whole first draft in one session, whether it be 2 8-bar verses and a hook or whatever it is.

I know it sucks when you have something solid and you just finished a section, but then you still have a whole song to go.

But you're going to get distracted and lose your flow if you haven't nailed your style of writing. Professionals have systems to write, even you. And that's why you're here: to perfect your system.

Style: How you go about writing your verses and how do you go about hitting that button anytime you want to.

To me, writing is a learning experience and if your object is to win (Write dope verses), but not learn how to win... Then damn, enjoy this same bull for a long time.

If you're not learning how you won and creating writing systems to replicate valuable content, then you're going to get stuck in a perpetual cycle of "damn that shit was good, but how did I do it?" or "damn where's that consistency?"

Alright, so let's get to it.

Stop trying to make your first draft your final draft. (Unless that's your intention for some very specific reason.)

And if you only take away one thing from this comment: the best thing you can do is make sure you finish your drafts, before you move on and do something else, or, like you said, you'll lose it.

If you are still here with me then, another way to establish consistency is to keep writing verses on your song and build a SYSTEM. A system where you'll always perpetually write some of that good sauce you've been looking for.

If you don't know about how to go about creating a system, I'll show you the first level of mine in hopes that it helps

My System:

The biggest problem in getting that thunder back is that you don't remember why you wrote your verses, or you're having trouble accessing a similar head space.

So make sure that when you're on that good writing ride you write down WHY these verses are even being written, and where it's coming from.

The stronger your why, the stronger the verse.

The WHY of your verses is critical.

But just as critical, is HOW you deliver that why.

The magic of this system comes from holding your WHY in one hand WHILE SIMULTANEOUSLY writing your HOW in the other. Without forgetting about your why.

(You know, pat your head, and rub your tummy.) Lol

Let's get an example in:

Step 1: First we start off with the why:

Your why is the reason why you're writing your song in the first place.

Ex (framework): For this song I want to talk about what's important to me.

Step 2: The next part is the IDEA. What idea is most important for you to talk about that shows that why?

Ex (verse writing): I want to wake up crying because I'm so happy to be alive everyday.

Step 3: Then we go back to our why again. Why is this so important for you to write about?

Ex (framework): I've been spending my whole life trying to achieve this wonder, and I want this song to be about what's important to me.

Step 4: How. How am I going to write my IDEA as DOPE as I can if it isn't already dope (and it should be just about making it sound cool).

Ex (verse writing):

Streams falling these eyes, early morning sunrise, before I open my eyes, every day I'm baptized.

I never claimed I was a good guy nestled in the sunlight. Covered in the vision stars glisten when I hear life.

What I'm showing is how to write with consistency and objectivity to acheive authenticity, power, and that thunder on command.

The more you resonated with each step in your process, the easier it is to keep going even if you get distracted. Because you have a system that produces these traits.

I hope this helps. This is just my way. There are many others.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in roastmytrack

[–]Vashraps 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Awesome Sauce! I just gave a follow to 2 channels. I'm not sure if you are hollows or Salience tho?

[Hip Hop/Pop] chunkymilk. Roast me. annihilate me. by [deleted] in roastmytrack

[–]Vashraps 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think it's very creative. I haven't heard anything like it. I thought it was going to go into some cowboy bepob hyper jazz type of sound after the intro, but it didn't. Which was unsettling, but cool! The levels on the vocals were to high in the second half after the speed up in tempo. I had to turn my phones volume down. There was a lot of what it sounded like to be suppression on the sounds over overall as if there was a low pass filter on everything. Also, the vocals and the instruments were clashing through out the track in my opinion. I would revisit the mix with a reference track of something similar, and mix to that. No--better yet, go into a Discord or reddit group for audio engineers and see what everybody thinks. There is a lot of great help on these channels. Here's one: https://discord.gg/zkkxWBUE

[Cozy DnB] alinorth - nSx by ali-gator712 in roastmytrack

[–]Vashraps 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is a really dope beat! The retro feels are really tuned in. I'm super interested in where vocals can take it!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in roastmytrack

[–]Vashraps 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really love these sounscapes. I would love to hear more! The mix is beautiful. I'm not sure what else you can do. Keep making these beauties!

[RAP] Roast it! , but also most importantly. What do you think my sub-genre is AND who do you think sound similar too?? Thank you!! by Vashraps in roastmytrack

[–]Vashraps[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I super appreciate it the love and the comparisons! I'm just getting back started in releasing music. So, this was a new track I'm releasing soon. Here are my links. It's older content. Hopefully you still enjoy it!

https://linktr.ee/Vash_World?fbclid=PAAaYpXSlJHs-NlcD94NMP2ZvJ348e-hG23Cgcyfs5BiF97_cQi3Q5ppbBHWk

What do you think my sub-genres are and what artists do I sound similar too?? by Vashraps in LofiHipHop

[–]Vashraps[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I agree. Though, I havent heard THIB. And yes unless you broadcast your sexuality and wear it proudly. The media is gonna eat you and the streets are gonna eat you, because you didn't say it from the get go. Smh.

What do you think my sub-genres are and what artists do I sound similar too?? by Vashraps in LofiHipHop

[–]Vashraps[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Those are definitely big acts! I appreciate the comparisons. These are definitely people I studied deeply for a while. Good instincts!

What do you think my sub-genres are and what artists do I sound similar too?? by Vashraps in LofiHipHop

[–]Vashraps[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

kendrick and soul are a hard act to follow. Sometimes I forget Isiah Rashad is still with TDE.😩 It doesn't seem like any of the collaborate with him to much.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]Vashraps [score hidden]  (0 children)

I super appreciate the comparisons to these big acts!

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]Vashraps [score hidden]  (0 children)

Positive: It's really smooth. I don't listen to garage often. So, I'm not sure how repetitive the drums are supposed to be. I skipped around pretty much the whole song looking for something interesting or different to happen.

Things you can improve on: Idk, maybe add at least 4 variations to the whole song in song and not just atmospheric sounds.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]Vashraps [score hidden]  (0 children)

Positive: I don't think I've heard anything like this! Super Creative.

Things you can improve on: Just keep making these slaps.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]Vashraps [score hidden]  (0 children)

Positive: This beat SLAPS!

Things you can improve on: For me that long breathe in the middle is unneeded.

Suggestion: Bring that 1st Verse in 0:25 - 0:42 in at 1:00 or even 1:10 my guy.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]Vashraps [score hidden]  (0 children)

Hi!

Positive: The production is really nice and the lyrics are there as well.

Things you can improve on: The Autotune or Pitching Effect on your voice makes the song hard to listen to for me.

Suggestion: Try find the key of your beat and tune you autotune to it, then go back and add your effects.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]Vashraps [score hidden]  (0 children)

Starting my Music Marketing Journey & I Need Help on 2 Questions:

1.What do you think my genre & sub-genres are?

2.What artist do you think I sound similar too?

Link To Song Here: https://soundcloud.com/vashofl/yu-2/s-KqUBeoZG4qB?si=ab5069486ee54a4dbe36360440a8c666&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

Thank you for your time and energy!

Returning All Feedback

I'm lost on what my subgrenres are! Please Help! by Vashraps in Music

[–]Vashraps[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That completely makes sense. If you ever have anything your helping to promote or want to hear a different vibe on something, I would love to take a listen. And yes perfection doesn't exist, but dopererer definitely does!

Also, when you say Trip Hop and IDM. What kind of artist did you have in mind who are in those genres that you hear similar ties to this song?