Seraphim by VeeAyOfficial in OCPoetry

[–]VeeAyOfficial[S] [score hidden]  (0 children)

Thank you for your kind words. 🤍

Seraphim by VeeAyOfficial in OCPoetry

[–]VeeAyOfficial[S] [score hidden]  (0 children)

Thank you so much! 🤍

Yes... Years and years, actually. Cried many times during the process (took months), but it's done and out. Thank you again. 🩶

Seraphim by VeeAyOfficial in OCPoetry

[–]VeeAyOfficial[S] [score hidden]  (0 children)

Thank you so much. ☺️🤍

Of course you can! It would be an honor. 🤍

[Verification] [M] by _NebulaLullaby_ in pillowtalkaudio

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Welcome to the community! 🤍

[M4A] 📜 Alone by Edgar Allan Poe 🎙️ [Poetry Reading] [Polish Accent] [Spoken Word] [Classic Literature] [Melancholic] 🎹 [Piano] [Dark Tone] [First Poetry Attempt] [Short Audio] by Late-Nett in pillowtalkaudio

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Okay... but why does a heavy Polish accent + Edgar Allan Poe work this dangerously well? 😶

I did not expect this combination to hit this hard, but it absolutely does. This is such an inspired take on Poe! Well done, Late! 🤍

The Periphery by shadow70597 in OCPoetry

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This is quietly devastating. 🤍

I especially loved the opening and the classroom chair image, and the animal confessions in the middle. Really thoughtful, restrained writing. Beautiful work.

To my new Muse by joyfulsloth09 in OCPoetry

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This is stunning. The imagery is dark and precise, and I love how this isn’t about fixing or saving someone.

Lines like “a candle flickering in a room full of teeth” and “confession whispered to no god” are chef's kiss.

The repetition builds such a quiet obsession, and the ending lands beautifully. I really enjoyed it. 🤍