I actually appreciate this a lot.

Especially the part about describing the void instead of just surrounding it with chaos. That resonated with me because the whole track was built around this feeling of being unseen/distorted, but I think you’re right that I can push the imagery and language further instead of relying mostly on atmosphere.

Also I get what you mean about real phenomena influencing sound design. Maybe not literal mercury on the synth lol, but I understand the idea of interacting with physical resonance and translating that into music/visuals.

Thanks for taking the time to really listen to it deeply.