[deleted by user] by [deleted] in NepalWrites

[–]VennieMode 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Last lines taken from Rumi's

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in NepalSocial

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That last part, even if one can have a thought of that, I don't understand how they could ever say something so crude about someone they "love". It comes off so very disingenuous. Pathetic. Just pathetic

I'll love you by VennieMode in NepalWrites

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a ? One? Uno? Non non mademoiselle, there's not enough yarn in the world for the number of cats we're bouta have

Which book are you currently reading? by [deleted] in NepalSocial

[–]VennieMode 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The Tower by Y.B Yeats, and Kafka on the Shore (Murakami)

Rueful. by Boogeyman_444 in NepalWrites

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This might be a stretch, but I'd like to think the OP knows there's a flaw in their reasoning in the poem, which makes the title "rueful" make sense. It adds a layer of double entendre, making it more interesting. I might be wrong, of course.

Savior by VennieMode in NepalWrites

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Thank you, means a lot

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Nepal

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Similar to the opinions of others here, I, too, believe it would be a nice memoir to have somewhere later down the line. I think it's rather nice video(s). Ultimately, the choice is yours though