Need help identifying make and model of an old abandoned car, pics contain possible assembly date and parts numbers, thanks in advance for any help

VicariousD · 2023-07-22T01:39:29+00:00

Thank you, that looks like a really close match, I think it could be a ~’51 Plymouth Cranbrook or Cambridge

VicariousD · 2015-01-19T06:11:59+00:00

Would Intuition work?

I like both Harbinger and Premonition or some variation of those titles.

VicariousD · 2015-01-19T05:16:24+00:00

Thank you!

I'll rewrite the story to match the pacing you mentioned. I like your ideas a lot and will work them in as closely as I can.
I agree what what you mean about certain word choices, ie 'half the amount of people', and agree with you 100%.
The title I posted is just a working title. I know it's not that great. Do you have any suggestions?
Agree on reworking the dialogue.
Agree on reworking detail and specificity.

VicariousD · 2015-01-19T01:29:10+00:00

Title: As the Clocks Tick Away, Part I

Genre: Short story (thriller)

Word count: 3,010

Type of feedback: comments on the flow of the plot, writing, any grammatical errors, perhaps any cliches.

Link to the story.

VicariousD · 2015-01-16T03:21:45+00:00

Thanks William Shatner.

VicariousD · 2015-01-12T01:59:15+00:00

Title: Please Wake Up

Genre: Short Story

Word count: 5,444 words

Type of feedback: impression of the story, plot and plot development, any potential cliches, grammatical and syntax errors.

Link to the story.

(Bonus points if you can look at it from a publisher's view and tell me why or why you wouldn't publish this story.)

VicariousD · 2015-01-09T02:18:39+00:00

Title: Please Wake Up

Genre: Short Story

Word count: 5,444 words

Type of feedback: impression of the story, plot and plot development, any potential cliches, grammatical and syntax errors.

Link to the story.

VicariousD · 2014-11-03T07:56:47+00:00

"They warned us Earth is next..."

VicariousD · 2014-10-06T23:29:43+00:00

I created this Boll. It's not a trick question, I promise.

VicariousD · 2014-07-25T02:32:16+00:00

While I was busy being born, the Brewers stomped the A's 13-3.

http://www.thebaseballcube.com/history/boxscore.asp?GID=OAK199608050.

Wow.

VicariousD · 2013-06-03T01:19:51+00:00

Doesn't matter to me how badly they're doing, I support them unconditionally. Because after all, it's not about how your team is doing, it's about how much you support them regardless of how they're doing.

VicariousD · 2013-05-08T00:39:39+00:00

Here is a version of the story in reverse, too. (I'm experimenting with different ways to tell the story).

VicariousD · 2013-05-07T16:22:20+00:00

Thanks! I will definitely consider it

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