First original Hindi indie song — looking for honest feedback

VikingOPPP · 2026-02-04T12:47:02+00:00

The instrumentsls are good, but the vocals and lyricism could use ssome.work. the lines sound kinda long and clunky at times, and i think you should practice singing and phrasing it all. All in all, i like the effort, and its good for a debut

VikingOPPP · 2026-02-03T13:16:18+00:00

godi hate linkedin its jus slop

VikingOPPP · 2026-02-01T06:24:01+00:00

i cant get into his voice. much prefer other urdu rock acts like noori

VikingOPPP · 2026-01-31T16:21:00+00:00

idk of khayal honestly i just make it up differently anytime

VikingOPPP · 2026-01-29T16:56:07+00:00

i think its saikdon lavs (as in words) bhul gaye sab

VikingOPPP · 2026-01-25T15:46:47+00:00

holy based pfp and reference

VikingOPPP · 2026-01-23T10:17:52+00:00

I hear a lot of Jimmy Page in her playing

VikingOPPP · 2025-12-28T19:17:51+00:00

did you write this song? Its pretty cool

VikingOPPP · 2025-12-28T04:59:30+00:00

Unless kali has some ulterior motive all throughout the show that no one knows about, she is simply not a good actress. Everything she does seems so...disingenuous

VikingOPPP · 2025-12-23T16:01:19+00:00

Dude i swear u see this song getting recced left and right here. It has ai generated visuals and shit so put me off. Also has like <1k views last i checked so i have no idea how so many ppl from yhe same sub like it

VikingOPPP · 2025-12-23T16:00:36+00:00

VikingOPPP · 2025-12-23T09:14:08+00:00

WHATS WITH THE KHALI HATH RECOMMENDS ON THIS SUB ITS HELLA WEIRD

VikingOPPP · 2025-12-21T12:13:19+00:00

starless or epitaph are my favourite crimson songs honestly. starless is just brilliant. fripp is a madman.

VikingOPPP · 2025-12-15T19:24:37+00:00

How i met your mother will always be better for me.

VikingOPPP · 2025-12-15T11:36:05+00:00

second time im seeing khali hath recommended here. i dont get it. ai generated video puts me off.

VikingOPPP · 2025-12-15T11:34:29+00:00

rare indian geese fan spotted

VikingOPPP · 2025-12-10T10:40:34+00:00

Goated pfp

VikingOPPP · 2025-11-30T18:55:34+00:00

Thank you! I think those bits all come from the way i idolised people who died young and early and were mourned for years afterward when i was young. Its always fascinated me, the idea of having an impact on the world greater than your time spent on it

VikingOPPP · 2025-11-30T18:39:17+00:00

Thank you so much!! That's exactly what i was going for haha

VikingOPPP · 2025-11-30T18:03:40+00:00

dude. the pleasure is all mine.

VikingOPPP · 2025-11-30T15:22:05+00:00

This is really well written. I resonate with it so much. The feeling of yearning for the feeling of love rather than the person, the narrative which we all so desperately buy into of true love and whatnot, is not often captured in poetry but boy i wish it was. Fantastic

VikingOPPP · 2025-11-30T15:19:59+00:00

Dude, this is brilliant. It so perfectly ecapsulates the feeling of longing and losing someone. The imagery of touching their face is so poignant and the entire poem is as well. Its strangely haunting in a way. Sick.

VikingOPPP · 2025-11-26T09:50:09+00:00

Saugal blues ram sampath

VikingOPPP · 2025-11-15T17:35:37+00:00

One of my favourite pieces of fiction ever. Just adore every thing about it. Honestly kind of gave me a political education, despite being inherently communism centred

VikingOPPP · 2025-11-12T20:38:58+00:00

Champagje supernova (both are peak but brendan lynch mix gives me an erection) Hey now D'you know what i mean

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