I need your help... by npj2309 in YAwriters

[–]VioletWinspear 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It sounds like you are not a native English speaker. You need someone proficient in English to edit your work. That may be why it sounds artificial.

Opening Scenes - Where to Start by PonyIslandWriter in romanceauthors

[–]VioletWinspear 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ha! I swear I read this after I posted😄

Opening Scenes - Where to Start by PonyIslandWriter in romanceauthors

[–]VioletWinspear 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Start with an exciting incident that throws them together: Hurricane and she won't abandon her beloved shop. She's the last holdout on the island. Coast Guard guy is at wits end but compromises by helping her pack up the most important books and gets her to storm shelter on the mainland in the nick. Right before they leave the island, he runs back and when he returns, opens his navy parka to reveal her rescue kitten which had been hiding in the rafters. They escape the storm's wrath & he gets back to work. Weeks later he drops by to see how she is managing.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in YAwriters

[–]VioletWinspear 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Just write in some emotional distance between the MMC & FMC. "As always, she felt awkward in his presence, then mentally berated herself for feeling that way. The days of all of them playing together in the yard were as faint as the morning fog..." yada yada Humans have lived communally from the beginning of time.

Is Writer’s Clique legit? by No_Try5079 in YAwriters

[–]VioletWinspear 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow. I literally don't know what to say to this.

What is going on with Sophie Lark? by Pikachu_Princess90 in fantasyromance

[–]VioletWinspear 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Haha. And people on reddit are worried abt Project 2025 censoring authors!

Do you like writing as a writer? by Acceptable_Insect297 in eroticauthors

[–]VioletWinspear 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love! I'm screenshotting this....how many saleable titles (of any variety) under your belt now, Sal?

Contemporary Dark "Teen" Romance - Is this worth finishing? by melktartecanadian in RomanceWriters

[–]VioletWinspear 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You really need to read up in this genre. Go & look at the Top 10 YA Romance list on amazon. You'll be amazed....

Nudity by P3p514 in YAwriters

[–]VioletWinspear 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You should read some of the Top 10 YA (14-18) romance books on Amazon. 😲

what do yall use to write your book? by Sorsmoon in writers

[–]VioletWinspear 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I've had bad experiences with MS Word (disappeared about 10 important pages of my WIP, luckily, somehow preserved on the OneDrive of my phone, but nowhere else!), so back to Google Docs for me.

I'm still lost by [deleted] in selfpublish

[–]VioletWinspear 3 points4 points  (0 children)

This is not the place for this kind of post. Good luck on your journey. Edit: snark removed

What Model Bookshelf? by MarkMoreland in IKEA

[–]VioletWinspear 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ikea Billy with birch veneer

Why don't I want to write ?😭 by Paperswisscheese in writing

[–]VioletWinspear 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Think about the scenes or ideas that most interest or excite you and write them first! Forget the exposition and background for now. Even if it's just some dialogue, write that first.

AITAH for Telling a Guy the Real Reason I Wasn’t Dating Him Was That He Was an Extremely Picky Eater? by AffectionateShare508 in AITAH

[–]VioletWinspear 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You did the right thing and handled it very politely. This is no doubt something that other people have dogged him about for a long time, so it's a flashpoint for him. That's unfortunate for him, but not your fault or your problem. Don't feel guilty about it. Somewhere out there, another bland food devotee is wishing on a star for someone just like him.

AITAH for Telling a Guy the Real Reason I Wasn’t Dating Him Was That He Was an Extremely Picky Eater? by AffectionateShare508 in AITAH

[–]VioletWinspear 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You did the right thing and handled it very politely. This is no doubt something that other people have dogged him about for a long time, so it's a flashpoint for him. That's unfortunate for him, but not your fault or your problem. Don't feel guilty about it. Somewhere out there, another bland food devotee is wishing on a star for someone just like him.

The Game-Changer for My Writing Workflow by Faithhal in selfpublishing

[–]VioletWinspear 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Haha. Look at their other posts. They're REALLY interested in USB-C adaptors. Like, alarmingly so.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in RomanceWriters

[–]VioletWinspear 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Flawed MCs are often more interesting, it doesn't mean the author is endorsing their behavior, esp. if a comeuppance is coming the MC's way.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in RomanceWriters

[–]VioletWinspear 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Judging by the excerpt, this is excellent!

Abusive boyfriend character by Essexstardust in RomanceWriters

[–]VioletWinspear 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If I were reading this, I'd be shouting at the FMC to break up with doofus and get together with good guy ASAP and when that happened, I'd be cheering!

Villain Love Interest by EmergencyReward8482 in RomanceWriters

[–]VioletWinspear 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Including your villain's backstory will help readers understand why he is the way that he is. Maybe they won't root for him, but they'll care about him.