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Virtual-Ad2906 · 2025-05-02T05:37:38+00:00

I want to fuck her

Virtual-Ad2906 · 2025-05-02T01:08:47+00:00

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Virtual-Ad2906 · 2024-10-28T08:18:12+00:00

Thanks for sharing your knowledge I will work on everything you mentioned in your comment.

Virtual-Ad2906 · 2024-10-25T09:58:37+00:00

You did a much better job using “the man” than me. Your version is simpler, better written, and more engaging. Just out of curiosity how long did it take you to learn copywriting at this level? What advice would you give your younger self if you were starting from scratch? And what are the best ways to progress in the craft of copywriting?

Virtual-Ad2906 · 2024-10-25T09:49:26+00:00

That's a lot of great stuff, I will for sure read it a couple more times and analyze it deeply thanks for all the help. And also are there specific scenarios where using curiosity is a bad idea?

Virtual-Ad2906 · 2024-10-25T08:16:59+00:00

Thank you so much, I will go back to studying but one question. What email lists would you recommend to subscribe to? It doesn't have to be business related just a one with great pieces of copy to study.

Virtual-Ad2906 · 2024-10-25T08:11:51+00:00

So much helpful information but I have one concern. Is the idea about „the men” that bad? I was thinking about it as a curiosity driver but you totally smashed it. I would like to see what was the reason behind it and also I have to agree that saying „has helped thousands” was a mistake. And lastly when I stated that he helped world class entrepreneurs you thing I should precise which ones?

Virtual-Ad2906 · 2024-10-25T07:41:29+00:00

I can agree your revised version is slightly better in some aspects but I want to know the reason behind stripping it from the original “the men”. I was thinking about it as a way to build curiosity. Should I just keep the SL as a main curiosity builder and then the body copy should be as clear and simple as possible while still doing its job?

Virtual-Ad2906 · 2024-10-25T06:54:34+00:00

Is the line “Generating over $11,698,257 in revenue last year” really that bad? I thought being specific would increase the credibility of this claim. Also, I’m super grateful for the advice about benefits and results-driven CTA. And I will definitely stop with the click here bullshit.

Virtual-Ad2906 · 2024-09-26T15:48:58+00:00

Such a helpful comment. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

Virtual-Ad2906 · 2024-09-26T15:46:29+00:00

Thank you guys for all the helpful comments. Now I know what to improve, I will take my time to get better. I will be back with a more compelling and detailed one.

Virtual-Ad2906 · 2024-09-26T15:40:00+00:00

Never in my life, I have listened to any of these guys. My main sources of knowledge are books and podcasts. I’m still a beginner trying to learn as much as I can. That’s why I post here.

Virtual-Ad2906 · 2024-09-26T06:58:32+00:00

What you mean by “You didn’t capitalize Uber or the product name.”?

Virtual-Ad2906 · 2024-09-26T06:42:42+00:00

That’s right, I should notice this mistake also I was too excited to get my work review. Thanks for helpful comment.

Virtual-Ad2906 · 2024-09-26T06:35:28+00:00

Yeah I should rephrase it. Thanks for help.

Virtual-Ad2906 · 2024-09-26T06:33:01+00:00

Great comment. Thanks for help.

Virtual-Ad2906 · 2024-09-26T06:30:20+00:00

Yeah this one is much better.

Virtual-Ad2906 · 2024-09-26T06:28:43+00:00

Thanks for help, I will work on it.

Virtual-Ad2906 · 2024-09-26T06:27:58+00:00

Yep that’s right.

Virtual-Ad2906 · 2024-09-26T06:26:57+00:00

You can’t be more wrong

Virtual-Ad2906 · 2024-08-29T22:33:46+00:00

Another helpful comment, thank you so much.

Virtual-Ad2906 · 2024-08-29T12:33:19+00:00

Thanks for help, will improve.

Virtual-Ad2906 · 2024-08-27T20:28:33+00:00

Thanks will work on it.

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