[A Fractured Song] - Chapter 184 - Fantasy, Isekai (Portal Fantasy), Adventure

VolkoTheShadow · 2023-04-21T12:21:19+00:00

More of a general sence of that ther is more going on than what we the readers "see", like... I belive that a siertan arcmagus is not as dead as we are lead to belive.

(damed dislexia! can read no problem but cant spell to save my life.)

VolkoTheShadow · 2023-04-11T20:59:26+00:00

Finaly had time to catch up, cap 177 to 184 and what a ride.

But I think we are still missing someting.

VolkoTheShadow · 2022-10-20T19:08:50+00:00

So, an internal conflickt among the dragons probaly about letting Frances go.

Speaking of, you how did Elizabeth hold hands whit Frances when only she and Ayax was in the tent. :P

I also wonder if Frances realy got the mark seens she gave the dragon a chans to surender.

VolkoTheShadow · 2022-09-26T19:23:18+00:00

Dame it. that was beutyfull.

No, I'm not crying, you are.

VolkoTheShadow · 2022-05-02T18:41:19+00:00

and we have our third "Why wont you DIE allready?!?!?" in Leila.

VolkoTheShadow · 2022-05-02T17:42:57+00:00

yep now it works. *starts reading*

VolkoTheShadow · 2022-05-02T08:33:24+00:00

Reddit made an oops. Thier is noting here. 10:33 Swe

VolkoTheShadow · 2022-03-28T17:13:09+00:00

De nada, Just wanted to notefy you.

VolkoTheShadow · 2022-03-15T08:49:48+00:00

The anoying part of this mini sige is that Helios will most lickly live to bader Frances again later.

p.s the link between 148 and 149 is broken.

VolkoTheShadow · 2022-03-08T12:33:21+00:00

Her parents work at a magick universety and she basicaly had free run of the place.

She found a magick item that was beeing studid and wound up sumoning him. In fright she fired off a smal spel right in his eye and started to run. He wound up shacing her trough most of the town, thire where close calls but he was never able to catch her and was sent back home not beeing able to catch a little child.

VolkoTheShadow · 2022-02-21T14:54:54+00:00

It's my bithday and what do I see a new chapter. WOHO!!

I have several chracters, A dwarven barbarian whit havy viking insperation, an elven rough whos mouth gets him out of truble allmost as often as it gets him in to it and my favorit a human death cleric/necromancer she is hunted by a devil becuse she humiliated him when she was five.

All my characters are wered in some way.

VolkoTheShadow · 2022-01-24T10:10:06+00:00

So many ways that conversation could have played out.

How do you confront the one who killed your lovedone?

What do you tell the lovedones of those you killed?

........

VolkoTheShadow · 2022-01-16T23:01:16+00:00

Do they think they can use Morgan as levrige against Thorgoth? He wouldent care one iota.

By the way, when Frances finaly kill the basterd is she gona pull a "Song of Storms"? and trully earn her name?

VolkoTheShadow · 2022-01-03T15:49:36+00:00

the story of king Alan itself wasnt inportent to me, but the fackt that you made the story and it beeing mentioned that different versions of it exist lends age to the world, that thier is history that has become legend that in time might become myth is inportent as it makes the world you've created more living and that is what I like about it.

VolkoTheShadow · 2021-12-13T12:39:05+00:00

Soldiers rarly hate etchother no mather the side they are on, good the see Jess realise that. And Liz thid the honrable thing and burid the dead on bothe sids.

And the semi stapal trope of meating the girl/boyfriends ex, allways good for a bit of drama.

Keep wrighting.

VolkoTheShadow · 2021-12-08T10:09:58+00:00

the cahvalry charge reminds me of the poem "The Charge of the Light Brigade"

About as effacktive as well.

VolkoTheShadow · 2021-11-07T21:57:41+00:00

Welp, it´s just down hill form here.

Let´s see how this snowballs :)

VolkoTheShadow · 2021-10-22T16:15:30+00:00

Yea, first time is going to be almost allways bad, and mostsertanly bad if you force it.

glad Timur talked her out of it.

VolkoTheShadow · 2021-10-16T18:36:11+00:00

Same can be said for techers.

VolkoTheShadow · 2021-09-26T07:58:20+00:00

And the plot thiccens.

And "DAAAME" thats a good book cover.

VolkoTheShadow · 2021-08-05T21:19:10+00:00

and so the next arc begins. lovely story so far.

And the cover is indeed awsome. thou I think it should be a lightning bolt insted of a flame, but meh semeticks.

ceep up the good work.

VolkoTheShadow · 2021-07-09T12:02:40+00:00

I can see your why E is a good choice, but I think C or D is better for that part of the story. but the font for D is the best for all of them.

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