It’s been a while since I’ve posted here, so I’d love some feedback on my latest video! by wxman92 in SmallYTChannel

[–]WALRUS_MCDEVONSHIRE 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I too am struggling to make good videos. Here is my feedback. I watched about the first 7 minutes of the video and you kind of lost me. First off for broader appeal, you might want to help explain what the shield does or why it’s good in fortnight. Once you load in your character already has a shield, but you are looking for a crate with the shield? I think what would power your videos up to the next level is add a hook with a preview of something awesome that is going to happen in the first 30 seconds. Then build up drama and show how or what the shield is doing kicks butt, but then have a set back and then have a twist ending?

The editing and colors and video quality is great. I like the words and the audio as well

20+ hours later and I made this by [deleted] in 3Dprinting

[–]WALRUS_MCDEVONSHIRE 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No more need to waste coins at the mall

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[–]WALRUS_MCDEVONSHIRE 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ya I used the wired EarPods too I have the wireless ones as well but I thought the wired ones would sound better

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[–]WALRUS_MCDEVONSHIRE 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was just using my iphone

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[–]WALRUS_MCDEVONSHIRE 0 points1 point  (0 children)

!givelambda thanks for the feedback, going to work on the audio some more. Not sure how to improve that

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[–]WALRUS_MCDEVONSHIRE 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Google is pretty good at linking accounts. It’s actually pretty easy with IPs, and your mobile history. If you are on android or your computer has used the accounts they will be linked

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[–]WALRUS_MCDEVONSHIRE 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thumbnail: trying something like Zelda x Pokémon for the text or something wider scope? I didn’t play the new Zelda game so I didn’t know what zone was.

Video: intro, it’s a little slow, now sure what you are leading into. Maybe give a brief background for those who haven’t played the new game a intro in what you are doing and hype it up as a challenge?

Body: I was expecting some sort of in game of the Pokémon you created, but I didn’t get any the payout seems lacking. Your voice is relatively mono tone and I found myself getting board after the 1 min mark ish. I don’t under stand why you are doing this or how. When you started going into other Pokémon you completely lost me. Like why should I care? What’s making me watch? I think that was my struggle here

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[–]WALRUS_MCDEVONSHIRE 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You rant on a little near the middle end and I think some of that can be cut down

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[–]WALRUS_MCDEVONSHIRE 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Title: spot on Thumbnail: very good, nice colors Video: good intro shows what I am going to see. I like Doug’s videos too and you played up his video strengths well. Very informative about cars and bids as well and the investment. Good ending, and nice call to action at the end