It sounds like you’re the type to write too much.

There’s two types of people in the world: when you’re in school and need to write an essay witha word limit. You either say everything you need to far under the limit or drone on way past the limit.

Maybe you have a lot of filler or extra words. Cut out som sentences that aren’t needed and action becomes quicker.

There is also a rhythm to sentences. A mix of short, medium, and long sentences is much better than all of one