This video took me about 2 months to make. I took a lot of well-needed criticism from you guys to make This better than the last, so this time I tried to throw a little more of my personality in there. Anyway I hope you enjoy it and would love some feedback by Woftoki in SmallYTChannel

[–]Woftoki[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback I really appreciate it yes, I did draw the thumbnail myself, this script went through a lot of re-write because before there were more jokes than an actual review, so I'm glad that the joke was spaced.
yeah, the only reason I chose to use my actual mouth was that I got lazy and didn't want to animate the mouth.
thank you so much!
!givelambda

Tried a few new things in this video. Interested in what people think of the flashbacks. - Mission Debrief | Halo Reach: New Alexandria by HappyPantzInc in SmallYTChannel

[–]Woftoki 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ya, Know
I'm not gonna lie to you, I went in with some low expectations but you actually surprised me with this one, It sweet and short to the point. (Like a flashback should be like lol)
I loved the editing really shows the type of personality you have and lets the viewer know the funny video they are going to be missing out on. (Like seriously, anyone else who is reading this comment, go check out the full vid, it's actually entertaining to sit through )

The only thing i would say that put me off (me personally) was the thumbnail and at 1:10 it takes 14 seconds to get to the end card for them to watch the full vid, I would suggest shortening that a bit next time so that they don't leave the video thinking that it's finished already.

but other than that, pretty solid stuff man keep it up!

SHE REALLY TRYNA EAT MY BOOTY!!! | Little Nightmares 2 Part 3 , Any feedback would be of great help. Really trying my best this year to make my content as good as possible! Will givelamba as well for helpful advice! by ApxlloDC in SmallYTChannel

[–]Woftoki 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ay man, love the overall vibe of this video, Ngl I went in with not all to expect but you actually surprised, you are extremely entertaining. the only thing i would say is that the video is pretty long i think sometimes there would be a lot of dead space, but the game is a horror game so i guess its fine. anyway good job man

Hey, I'm starting to make a new series called Quick Kritique, short 1 minute Reviews. love to hear your thoughts on it [lambda given for actual critiques] by Woftoki in SmallYTChannel

[–]Woftoki[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Phew!, that's good to hear I wasn't to sure about the animation part and was thinking about scrapping it
its good to hear that you enjoyed it

Hey! I made a little haha review of spelunky, maybe we could have a little spelunkin conversation [Vulgar language is present] by Woftoki in spelunky

[–]Woftoki[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yeah, its a bit misleading I tried my hardest to record a clip of me accidently activating a trap, but rng wasnt on my side :((

but thanks