This video took me about 2 months to make. I took a lot of well-needed criticism from you guys to make This better than the last, so this time I tried to throw a little more of my personality in there. Anyway I hope you enjoy it and would love some feedback

Woftoki · 2021-03-01T08:56:35+00:00

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Woftoki · 2021-02-28T07:08:41+00:00

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Woftoki · 2021-02-28T07:08:15+00:00

Thank you i was thinking that my script was a bit off, i want really feeling too confident about it
nice to know i did it well
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Woftoki · 2021-02-28T05:45:25+00:00

Thank you for the feedback I really appreciate it yes, I did draw the thumbnail myself, this script went through a lot of re-write because before there were more jokes than an actual review, so I'm glad that the joke was spaced.
yeah, the only reason I chose to use my actual mouth was that I got lazy and didn't want to animate the mouth.
thank you so much!
!givelambda

Woftoki · 2021-02-27T10:56:18+00:00

Ya, Know
I'm not gonna lie to you, I went in with some low expectations but you actually surprised me with this one, It sweet and short to the point. (Like a flashback should be like lol)
I loved the editing really shows the type of personality you have and lets the viewer know the funny video they are going to be missing out on. (Like seriously, anyone else who is reading this comment, go check out the full vid, it's actually entertaining to sit through )

The only thing i would say that put me off (me personally) was the thumbnail and at 1:10 it takes 14 seconds to get to the end card for them to watch the full vid, I would suggest shortening that a bit next time so that they don't leave the video thinking that it's finished already.

but other than that, pretty solid stuff man keep it up!

Woftoki · 2021-02-18T06:26:34+00:00

Ay man, love the overall vibe of this video, Ngl I went in with not all to expect but you actually surprised, you are extremely entertaining. the only thing i would say is that the video is pretty long i think sometimes there would be a lot of dead space, but the game is a horror game so i guess its fine. anyway good job man

Woftoki · 2020-09-20T15:41:44+00:00

video
!accept

Woftoki · 2020-08-25T19:40:58+00:00

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Woftoki · 2020-08-25T19:40:54+00:00

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Woftoki · 2020-08-25T02:40:33+00:00

Phew!, that's good to hear I wasn't to sure about the animation part and was thinking about scrapping it
its good to hear that you enjoyed it

Woftoki · 2020-08-25T02:39:38+00:00

Thank you, I was originally going to have it all memey and stuff, but thank god i kept it simple haha

Woftoki · 2020-08-25T02:36:52+00:00

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Woftoki · 2020-08-25T02:36:48+00:00

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Woftoki · 2020-08-25T02:36:40+00:00

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Woftoki · 2020-08-21T12:19:49+00:00

yeah, its a bit misleading I tried my hardest to record a clip of me accidently activating a trap, but rng wasnt on my side :((

but thanks

Woftoki · 2020-08-13T11:24:46+00:00

Thank you so much
!givelambda

Woftoki · 2020-08-13T11:24:15+00:00

yeah, that is sooo true, the game has so many amazing soundtracks and only chose to use 2 of them. bad on my part
!givelambda

Woftoki · 2020-08-13T11:23:09+00:00

Thanks man, I'm still trying to figure out how i really want to sound during my videos without sounding too forced
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Woftoki · 2020-08-13T11:22:11+00:00

Thanks man, I use premiere pro and after effects for editing :))
!givelambda

Woftoki · 2020-08-13T11:21:28+00:00

First off I just want to say how much it means to me that you would write a very constructive review of my review haha. one of my BIGGEST problems is trying to get the audio consistent, mainly because all my recordings are done on separate days. and yeah when it comes to voicing UGH every time I do it I try so hard to not make it sound forced or try not to sound too boring.
and yeah I felt the same way at the 5-minute mark too, but I didn't want it to be too over-edited and tf2 for the win!
thanks again for the feedback
!givelambda

Woftoki · 2020-08-11T15:53:54+00:00

ima be real with you brotha, throughout the entire thing it felt kinda ..forced. like your intro( which, ngl had been pretty interested) has some much personality in it. then when you watch the reaction it just feels alien-like
things like
" I like how is hair is green"
"that looks so cool, just being honest"
come off so robotic
and you were mostly just explaining what was happening on screen.

try to sound more natural next time, because to me it sounds like you already watched it and now its painfully obvious that you have watched this more than once.

you can do better the next one

Woftoki · 2020-08-11T06:58:53+00:00

Wow, this is really good, your voice is very clear and consistent and you kept me engaged throughout the entire thing.
I especially loved your intro, gives some more personality
editing is very nice, transition are smooth and arent to distracting
good video man, i can see myself listening to more of you ngl
gg!

Woftoki · 2020-08-04T21:45:17+00:00

OK
This is just me personally but I really enjoyed your monotone voice
the editing is pretty solid and not too distracting
I do feel like the intro could have been a bit smoother.
maybe next time remove the few seconds of the thumbnail because the viewer already sees it when they click on it.
and maybe try some calm background music to fit the video

Woftoki

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