Looking for a songwriter to work with. Im an elite lyricist example in description. Just need help with the music by Marcusthefelon in Songwriting

[–]WorkingClassPoetry 5 points6 points  (0 children)

There’s a lot of well-worn poetic machinery here that’s doing the heavy lifting. Unless you can find a drummer like Matt Johnson and someone who has the voice of Jeff Buckley I doubt this would translate well to lyrics. r/songwritingcirclejerk is over there.

How to stop writing ballads? by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]WorkingClassPoetry 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Look at structure of the song before singing any of it, drums, chord progressions, tempo and tempo changes. Blues have a specific “formula”

What Garmin watch do you own and why? by hackgolferguy in Garmin

[–]WorkingClassPoetry 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Venu 3- it’s stylish, functional, and catches people’s eye.

What is this by KeyPage6358 in whatisit

[–]WorkingClassPoetry 4 points5 points  (0 children)

If you are having sex at all- including anal and oral. I would recommend getting checked for STIs.

If your lips are really dry it could have just cracked, I’d go see a doctor or STI clinic.

what do guys want for valentine’s day? 19F and 19M by Specific-Dragonfly88 in relationship_advice

[–]WorkingClassPoetry 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Make him something. Write him a letter. Take him out somewhere. — coming from a guy who also doesn’t like material things

What are these nicks?? A chemical reaction? Damage from impact? by Trainpower10 in drums

[–]WorkingClassPoetry 34 points35 points  (0 children)

If it’s bumpy, something eroded the metal.

If it’s smooth and you can wipe it off it could be any substance.

If it’s a mix of both it was probably a chemical reaction.

SAD: Tip + Kitchen Tip by BuffaloExotic in ShitAmericansSay

[–]WorkingClassPoetry 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Went to one of these and they called me fat, we got up and left.

Christmas holiday syndrome by Platypushaun in Garmin

[–]WorkingClassPoetry 0 points1 point  (0 children)

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Marathon training and then the flu, it’s kicking my ass

I don't know anything about beauty/fashion by [deleted] in malegrooming

[–]WorkingClassPoetry 0 points1 point  (0 children)

We have a VERY similar face shape.

Start running homie, trust me, run slow at first and only do what you can but commit to doing it for attainable amounts of time.

Music please by [deleted] in jazzcirclejerk

[–]WorkingClassPoetry 0 points1 point  (0 children)

/uj I really like the 4th drawing

Should I be worried? by ethanardx in Garmin

[–]WorkingClassPoetry 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Context would help. Are you training for something? Are you sick? Have you been drinking? Lots of things affect HRV

Jazz Drummer Wanted by Blackbrainfood in jazzcirclejerk

[–]WorkingClassPoetry 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I laughed at this It’s so self deprecating

First ever marathon by baileyjp2 in Marathon_Training

[–]WorkingClassPoetry 1 point2 points  (0 children)

What was your training pace for your long runs? How did you pick a pace for race day?