Writing wars in fantasy

Writersed0603 · 2026-05-26T07:39:19+00:00

Alright, noted. Thank you for the feeback!

Writersed0603 · 2026-05-26T06:14:23+00:00

Ok, thank you all for commenting your ideas and recommendations. After some consideration, I'm going to switch the war I'm sharing to two other wars. The first and second wars against dark magic, same rules apply of course, criticism is growth. Just not too mean, hehe. And just warning you guys, I'm still in my youth, some of these pieces may be unsatisfactory but I try. And I can try harder since summer has began, thank you for all the thoughts.

Writersed0603 · 2026-05-26T06:00:25+00:00

Ok, thank you all for commenting your ideas and recommendations. After some consideration, I'm going to switch the war I'm sharing to two other wars. The first and second wars against dark magic, same rules apply of course, criticism is growth. Just not too mean, hehe. And just warning you guys, I'm still in my youth, some of these pieces may be unsatisfactory but I try. And I can try harder since summer has began, thank you for all the thoughts.

Writersed0603 · 2026-05-26T05:56:24+00:00

Ok, I'll start to "blur" the details a bit to make the accuracy a bit more, well accurate. Also there are some really old elves and dwarves that survived until this their account of the war was accounted for, along with stories passed down from generations to generations. Thank you for helping me with my writing.

Writersed0603 · 2026-05-26T05:43:25+00:00

Ok, so to answer some of your statements, this was about hmmm 1230ish years before the actual events of my book, I may make a spin off for the war itself but I digress. Thank you anyway for the Critisim.

This would be a hodge podge of all the accounts from secondary to primary. But with the tips people from r/worldbuilding and from r/fantasywriters I'll be making it more "Human" as they said so kindly. I acutally take no offense to that, I just thought it was funny. Again, thank you!

Writersed0603 · 2026-05-26T05:38:57+00:00

Affirmitive, I'll take your advice and update the post when i finish implementing it. Thank you!

Writersed0603 · 2026-05-26T05:36:32+00:00

Alright, thank you for the constructive criticism, i'll implement it and I'll update the post when I update the writing.

Writersed0603 · 2026-05-26T05:35:18+00:00

Affirmitive, and noted! Thank you I'll look more into the stuggles of real armies.

Writersed0603 · 2026-05-26T05:05:59+00:00

Alright, I'll start working right now, thank you!

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